Hi!
I want to apply for a Master Programme in Architecture and I have to write two recommendations as if they were wrote by my professors.
Please help me correct them.
Thanks in advance.
#1
To Whom It May Concern:
As a professor at Faculty of Architecture from Technical University of Iasi, I have had the chance of knowing Andrei Luca from his last year being his professor in one undergraduate course. I am writing you in order to support Andrei and his desire to attend Aalborg University for the Architectural Design Master's Programme. Andrei is one of my best students and therefore I sincerely recommend that he shall have the opportunity to attend your university.
I met Andrei in his fourth year of college during the autumn of 2008 semester and in the spring semester of 2010 I will supervise his Diploma project. Due to his background in architectural design projects he is able to focus on working with a given place taking into consideration all the details that may intercom, like archeological heritage, given the fact that he is placing the construction in a historical plaza.
I feel confident that he will continue to succeed in his studies. He is a dedicated student. In "Architectural Design" class he has proven to be a take-charge person who is able to successfully develop plans and implement them. I have confidence in his creativity and I am sure that he is motivated to give the best of him in attending your master programme.
Andrei is an outstanding individual with a strong character. He has the ability to produce impressive results in a wide variety of areas, being organized and motivated, self confident and success oriented. I have seen very good results on complex projects that offered great attention to detail where quality was never compromised.
I highly recommend that you consider his application as he will be a great asset to your programme. It is my hope that you will accept his admission to your university. If you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely,
Prof.__________________, Ph.D.
#2
To Whom It May Concern:
I have been a professor at Faculty of Architecture from Technical University of Iasi for more than fifteen years and I supervised many Diploma projects and I counseled many students seeking professional advancement.
I first came in contact with Andrei in his third college year when he attended my class of "Urban Doctrines". I gave him advice regarding theoretical approaches that he gracefully took into consideration and I also prepared him with the basic elements and concepts for the next step in his education. Over this time he proved to be a very ambitious person, well-motivated, capable of dealing a very big volume of work, modest, diligent and a person who likes jobs well done.
During classes Andrei has shown energetic enthusiasm for learning and openness to new ideas and moreover he exhibited an eagerness for knowledge and an understanding of the instructed principles of the class. He scored at the top of his class on all verbal and written examinations.
In each project that he develops, he is highly motivated to achieve his goal and he always tries to pursue another perspective for the given theme. I have seen his evolution during his academic years and I can certainly state that he is a reliable and a creative student.
It is with enthusiasm that I am writing to support Andrei Luca's application to the Architectural Design Master programme and I advise you thoughtfully to take it into consideration. If further information is needed, please feel free to contact me.
Sincerely,
Prof.________________, Ph.D.
Hallo Andrei, and welcome to EssayForum.
Are you sure that you have understood the assignment correctly? It is very common for applicants to collect letters of recommendation written by their professors, but I've never heard of an application requiring letters from the student from the viewpoint of a professor. It sounds a little questionable. What exactly is the requirement?
simplify:
...have had the chance to be Andrei Luca's [subject] professor during his undergraduate studies. I am writing you in order to support Andrei and his desire to attend Aalborg University for the Architectural Design Master's Programme. Andrei is one of my best students, and therefore I sincerely recommend that he shall should have the opportunity to attend your university.
I met Andrei in...
... he has proven to be a take-charge person who is able to successfully develop plans and implement them. (And I woul write something about great communication skills as well) I have confidence in his creativity and I am sure that he is ...
Andrei is an outstanding individual with a strong character. He has the ability to produce impressive results in a wide variety of areas, being organized and motivated, self-confident and success-oriented. I have seen...
... you will admit him into your university. If you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Nice!!!
