I will not be starting research until next semester and it is not final. I have not done under grad research in the past either. Also my current employment is in no way related to what I want to pursue in grad school
Your research includes everything you have studied for fun, out of passion. You probably have researched many subjects related to your chosen field. If you do not own a few books about this field, maybe it is not the right field! If you do own some books about it, these books represent your areas of research. I understand that the more relevant research would be rigorous academic research, but... if you have not yet done that, refer to your personal research.
As for the irrelevance of your employment... if you are clever, you can brilliantly talk about your irrelevant current employment in a way that reflects the perspective of someone who was born to do what you intend to do in grad school.
Don't capitalize high school.
that first paragraph barely says anything at all. Express an opinion, an ideal... express a concern. Give the essay a theme by doing something DISTINCT with the first paragraph.
After the first paragraph, the essay gets very good! You are quite impressive. I think you should rewrite the first para based on a theme you draw from the main ideas of the body paragraphs. What is the moral of the whole story?