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Masters in Polymerscience from a german University


sriharish 1 / 1  
Dec 17, 2011   #1
Please do the needful i have put up what all had come in mind to write the SOP, Finding difficult to arrange to put it in order with proper grammer.

Why Masters in Polymer Science.
During my 10+1 and 10+2 , I used to go to Chemistry lab with lot of enthusiasm and interest, Was trying to learn about chemistry and had many questions as there were different kind of reactions going on a same chemical and those questions used to give me lot interest to study chemistry. Hence after completions of 10+2, Thought of taking polymer science as a core subject to study as it was offered by only one college in our state and I was lucky enough to grab the starting second seat of this course from the top second college in my State, After getting in graduation was more interested to understand these viscoelastic materials which involves both chemistry and Physics, my thirst of knowing about these material increased then to write up about them in exam, Hence I scored lower in starting semester but the time I put up on to be strong in basics of these material helped me score very good in the coming semester which is reflected in my marks list ,and I was the topped second for the project submission, done on characterization of rubber compound filled with Thermoset grind Scrap. During this project got interest on knowing the behavior of elastomers So got into a post graduation diploma conducted by one of the top IIT "Kharagpur", where classes were conducted by Rubber technologist from manufacturing industries, It was a great opportunity for me as I am interested to know then to learn during this period, These classes from the industry people motivated me go into work for a rubber companies to Handel the trouble shootings during processing of polymers,

Hence got into a company called XXXXX (Very Small Scale Company where there is no automation of machines, Limited work force ) So got into this company had practical expose to mixing of elastomers and here I have even started raw material analysis lab which was not there before, this was one more good opportunity to learn and it boosted me to know more and learn how the quality Systems to be maintained which was difficult for me to understand as it was a small scale scale company, So my wish was to get into a bigger company. Got offer from ZZZZ one of the biggest tire manufactures in India.Here was in charge of Mixing and extrusion as I had interest to learn the practical strategies about the quality systems how they are Implemented and followed to keep the record of this Elastomers behavior, hence my involvement into quality impressed my superiors and they helped me to learn about systems during this period and I was trained about TS16949 and ISO 9001 and quality tools like Measurement system analysis, Production part approval, Statistical quality control internally in the plant and was in charge for doing internal audits in the plant, This was one more very big practical experience I had to know the factors which all parameters influence on the polymer behavior and how they can be controlled, and gradually started controlling the non conformities.

Then I got opportunity to work with a company called AAAA business unit of BBBBBB leading manufactures of polymers and chemicals. Here to put up with all the above academics and practical exposure presently working as a supplier of rubber chemicals and processing promoters where I meet customers try to understand there troubles during processing and will suggest our company chemicals by which there processing problems can be shooted, and getting up the new business to the company, One more exposure here for me to the line of Business and different kind of products different kind of machines from customer to customer over different places of western part of India as I am responsible for this work in this area, Different conditions of process helping me to come across new idea developments

I had been to Germany few months back for a technical training held by main Scientists and Technologist from my present working company, which boosted me to make up my mind to go for higher studies in the same stream where I can be expose my self in the field of research and do my best to know polymers more and create my career in research field and make my contribution to the field of polymers, hence I feel I am best suited for this course.

As soon as I made up my mind to pursue masters I started searching for the program
where I can excel in this field and found this joint program conducted by 1 2 3 and 4; After seeing the works and researches done by the professors of this 4 universities towards chemistry and physics of polymers, I came to a conclusion that I have enroll for this course and get knowledge regarding this subject. Hence I feel that studying polymers in this 2 year program helps me to make my career and get excel in this filed which is conducted jointly by these 4 universities. This program is having a very good and high level syllabus compared to other universities offering this course.

Why Germany
I feel that Germans have very good technology and there are very strong in there technical aspects which I personally felt when I visited this country and I am also working for Germany company in India where there technology is far far better and best then other companies, I can say German technology is one step ahead then other, But in the field of polymers I feel Germans are pioneer because till now to be frank in India rubber industries and plastic industry technicalities increased from Bayer which is again a German company. I feel there is lot to be learnt from this rich culture, historical background place and there is high level of perceived safety.

Hence I have made up my mind to pursue masters in polymer science which helps me to achieve my goal to make my career in research filed and go on understanding this beautiful material.

I feel greatly honored if I can find my way to join this joint program on polymer science, where I am quite confident in achieving my goal and enrich my knowledge and do my best to contribute this field of polymers.

Thanks in Advance for your cnsideration
NikoliT 3 / 12  
Dec 17, 2011   #2
During my 10+1 and 10+2, I used to go to Chemistry lab with a lot of enthusiasm and interest, <- There shouldn't be spaces before commas, only after. You used to go with "a lot" of enthusiasm and interest.

interest, Iw as trying to learn about C hemistry and had many questions as there wereabout the different kinds of reactions going on a same chemicalat the same time, and those questions used to give me a lot interest to study Chemistry. <-- I reworded it in such a way that it sounds better, but the meaning might not be as clear. The capitalization in Chemistry isn't necessary I believe, but rather a matter of preference. You have questions about something.

Why Germany
I feel that Germans have very good technologyare technologically advanced and there arethey are very strong in theretheir technical aspects, which I personally felt when I visited this countryGermany.and I am also working for a Germany company in India,their technology is far superior to that of other companies . As a result, I can say that German technology is one step ahead thenof others , Bb ut in the field of polymers I feel Germans are pioneers because tilluntil now,to be frank in India rubber industries and plastic industrytechnicalities in rubber and plastic industries in India increased from Bayer which is again a German company. I feel there is a lot to be learnted from this rich culture,andhistorical background placeand historically rich country . and there is high level of perceived safety. <- I attempted to make the overall paragraph sound better by crossing out a few parts and rephrasing others, the final sentence doesn't "flow" with what you are listing, so I crossed it out.

Hence, I have made up my mind to pursue a masters in polymer science which will helps me to achieve my goal to make my career in research filed (did you mean field?) and go on understanding this beautiful material. <- You didn't get the masters yet, so it's supposed to be in the future tense. I didn't correct the final part as I didn't quite understand the meaning.

I would feel greatly honored if I cancould find my way to joininto this joint program on polymer science, where I am quite confident in achieving my goal and enrich my knowledge and do my best to contribute this field of polymers.that I will achieve my goal, enrich my knowledge and do my best to contribute to this fascinating field

Sorry I didn't correct a lot, I'm really busy.
Hope I helped somewhat.
Good luck!
OP sriharish 1 / 1  
Dec 17, 2011   #3
Thanks Nikolit
It was a great help for me.
I request could some one help me out for the other parts of my SOp which were not corrected by Nikolit.


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