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I envision myself in two ways ; Statement of purpose Petroleum Engineering


omolola 1 / -  
Apr 17, 2013   #1
Hello everyone, kindly assist me to correct my pos for petroleum engineering ASAP. Thank you in advance.

My Personal Statement for MSc in Petroleum Engineering.
My main motivation for applying to study this course is my keen interest in oil technology and as a further discipline to my first degree.

I am a very ambitious man with passion for education, during my early years while I was growing up, I used to be fascinated by the science of inventions, and how a law is postulated and obeyed. I became interested in science and carried out some scientific experiments like making an iron pin to float on water, I further deepen my interest in science by enrolling in science subjects like Mathematics, Biology, Chemistry, Physics, Geography. After graduating from high school with grade A in mathematics and Chemistry, I began teaching high school classes immediately, I further obtain A 'Level at the Birkbeck college London grade A in Mathematics and Chemistry and proceeded to study Electrical and Electronics Engineering at the University of Nottingham where I became exposed to many challenges facing engineers today and how to overcome them logically.

Until alternative energy is devised, petroleum exploration would continue to attract engineers from all works of life.

During my undergraduate I partook in different projects working against time and ensuring cost of project estimate is kept to minimum, I further campaigned and was elected treasurer of the Nigerian Society where I took a leadership position ensuring accountability and transparency of committed trusted funds.

But I still yearned for more opportunities and challenges where I can use the skills gained at my undergraduate to take a leadership position in the oil industries.

I am expecting to graduate with a 2.1 soon and if admitted I believe with my desire to succeed in everything that I do , I will obtain a very high score in my dissertation, the research interest I have built on during my undergraduate will be made use of extensively to the completion of my Master's degree program.

I would also like to study in your university because of your excellent reputation and exemplary research facilities which keeps attracting many students to the school. The university has consistently demonstrated her readiness to support and assist students at all levels and I believe it is the right place for me to study for my master's degree.

Postgraduate study in petroleum engineering is my carrier dream, my passion for petroleum engineering did not wavered and am very excited, if admitted I will ensure the successful completion of my study by investing in time, hard work and dedication.

In the nearby future I envision myself in two ways either standing at the front of board of directors delivering technical know-how on petroleum reservoir or sitting in my office as a CEO petroleum consultant, either of the two will be realised, should I be offered admission at your reputable citadel of academy as my country has a large reservoir of oil and there are more oil wells being discovered but needs more engineers and I would be able to reshape my world and people I come in contact with through discipline, hard work and leadership.

Thank you for your consideration, I look forward to receiving your favourable communication.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Apr 18, 2013   #2
I am a very ambitious man with passion for education, during my early years while I was growing up, I used to be fascinated by the science of inventions, and how a law is postulated and obeyed.I

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From a young age itself, I have always been fascinated by science and inventions; how a law is postulated and obeyed.

I became interested in science and carried out some scientific experiments like making an iron pin to float on water, I further deepen my interest in science by enrolling in science subjects like Mathematics, Biology, Chemistry, Physics, Geography.

I found a great pleasure in carrying out scientific experiments like making an iron pin to float on water. As I grew I got deeply involved with science subjects like Mathematics, Biology, Chemistry, Physics, Geography

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