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An effort to make myself prominent..(Electrical Eng)


kawish 1 / 4  
Apr 20, 2010   #1
Hi,
I know, I am a really bad writer and when it comes something about myself then it becomes worst...so please bear my presence. Your scolding and correction both are highly appreciated.

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I am an Engineer ever since I was born. I had some indistinct characteristics tinged with Engineering when I was a little child, but more did I grow the more I became conscious of this fact that I had to develop those innate traits that needs to be polished.

Having achieved my Bachelors degree in Tele-Communication Engineering I felt so intensely, that my knowledge in this field is still deficient. However, King Fahd University of Petroleum & Minerals is expected to illumine my ways and lead me to my destination, therefore in the hope of getting some help in KFUPM, I would like to step-in in the threshold of haven for research seekers.

Pakistan has reached the stage of social and financial decadence. I had anticipated my daunting circumstances when I began my final year project i.e. Design and Fabrication of Unmanned Aerial vehicle (Quad rotor)capable of autonomous outdoor flight controlled by a radio frequency Transmitter/Receiver worked on the principles of feedback control system, used motion sensors for stabilization and sound knowledge for signal processing and modulation. So far as my theoretical knowledge is concerned about my project, I read a good range of research work in order to grasp the important details of its technicalities. But when I made an effort to attack the fabricating phase pragmatically, I came across manifold difficulties. Sometimes there were no sensors available in the local market; sometimes there was a lack of technical expertise. However, to overcome all these difficulties I used to knock-about in the markets, even though I had gone through the research work, made complex analysis and finished design process to the last degree. Nevertheless, I couldn't accomplish the fabrication process, on account of meager resources and lack of scientific approach; I was downcast about the prospect of my better future.

Despite all these facts, I remained committed and did not distract attentions from my work. This inevitable march of events filled me with the sense of responsibility, time management and determination.

I feel affinity with teaching, if I look over the pages of my life it unfolds the aspect that is taking shape with the passage of time. I am an avid reader and like to read different subjects that give a peculiar insight of the world and vision to look upon things with thousands of eyes. Few professors have impressed me a lot and left indelible imprints on my mind. They piqued my curiosity goaded me to share whatever I have learned from my personal experiences and academics. Since, last semester I have been teaching different computer courses in my own university FAST NUCES, this program has been supported and funded by Government of Pakistan as Benazir Bhutto Shaheed Youth Development Program (BBSYDP). Teaching gave me the opportunity to excel myself in creating, furnishing and communicating my knowledge and thoughts to other people. It gave me wisdom that how a teacher thinks and relate his emotions to a student and in returns what he wants. Acquiring knowledge is not as difficult as delivering it but when you learn this art you become more eager and ambitious.

Unfortunately the present circumstances in Pakistan brought about not only positive democratic reforms and political freedom but also reduction of enhancement possibilities for scientists and curtailment of stable government subsidies for scientific projects. As a result the concerns about students suffered a lot. All this encouraged me to look for possibilities to continue my study in the KFUPM. I think it would be a good chance to receive high-level education under guidance of strong scientists and excellent teachers and with the help of first-class equipment.

SYED WAQAR UDDIN
FAST NUCES KARACHI.
Essays1010 2 / 10  
Apr 20, 2010   #2
I am an Engineer ever since I was born. this first sentence doesn't make sense I think you should try to reword.

They day I was born was the day I became an engineer?
OP kawish 1 / 4  
Apr 20, 2010   #3
Thanx lala..I think u are right..i will rephrase it..how abt the rest of the statement..?? waiting for your precious comments...
OP kawish 1 / 4  
Apr 21, 2010   #4
Respected Moderator,Members & visitors

Please review the above statement of purpose and if you have any suggestions on how to make it more readable and aesthetic then please let me know...Dead line for submission is about to come and I am in real trouble... Need help from you guys.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Apr 21, 2010   #5
I have been an Engineer ever since I was born.

when I was a little child, but the more I grew the more I became conscious of the fact that I had to develop those innate traits that needed to be polished.

Pakistan has reached the stage of social...

The paragraph that starts with this is SO impressive!

Despite all these facts, I remained committed and did not allow my setback to distract attention from my work. This inevitable march of events filled me with a sense of responsibility time management and determination.

Just say responsibility and determination, because time management does not make sense here in this sentence.

:-)
OP kawish 1 / 4  
Apr 22, 2010   #6
your feedback is highly obliged..

Kevin..you are serving the humanity by doing this :)...

One more query is that, I am working on a research paper regarding Digital Image Processing and have done some Juniper Networks, Microsoft and Cisco Certifications.. Should I mention these things??? Would it be beneficial for my Case...???

& Once again... Thank you for giving me your concentration and time.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Apr 24, 2010   #7
You are welcome!!

I am working on a research paper regarding Digital Image Processing and have done some Juniper Networks, Microsoft and Cisco Certifications.. Should I mention these things??? Would it be beneficial for my Case...???

I think you should, and the best way to do it is to mention those things all in one sentences, like you do here. Some people make the mistake of using a whole paragraph to talk about accomplishments, but I think it is good to overwhelm the reader with several impressive accomplishments in the same sentence. That's intensity.
OP kawish 1 / 4  
Apr 26, 2010   #8
Thank you for reviewing and your suggestions...


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