a period of time more specific than an era such as the culturally broadcasted 60s or the 80s
This part is confusing! I am confident that the sentence will be better without this phrase.
I'll add a comma:
It was a farewell to the 20th century, yet some of its characteristics still remained, such as the use of cassette tapes.
My fascination about
revealing what more had happened in 2000 is turned on by the devotion to nostalgia. This part needs to be written a different way.
To recall myself, I started middle school of that time. I was thirteen, perhaps the age that one's brain is most unsettled, eager to perceive and imagine, and can storage the largest quantity of data that
can be transformed into future memory. ----another great sentence!!
Again, the subject matter is the year 200
0; the strategy is to partially borrow a perspective of the 13 year-old girl/tractor duo, and the essential theme is to embody the significance and uniqueness of this year.
what is the true significance behind all these nostalgia...---- can nostalgia be plural? I would think it is "all this nostalgia" or "all these nostalgic (plural noun)"...
The difference between a documentary and a mockumentary is that documentary does not manipulate the fact presented, ------I would say any portrayal involves some manipulation!
This documentary, temporarily given an ironic name
of <the Making of 2000>, is my...
This is obviously very inspired and well conceived! They will like it!