"IT Career guidance and the advent of Cloud is paramount to change GDPs for poor nations"

My story is short but it can change the problems poor countries are facing. Having completed a BSc honors in Information Systems I have worked for various IT/Financial/Training firms and I realized that knowing the right path to follow in any career is highly important not only to the success of an individual or business but largely to the rate of development of the country. I have consulted for many businesses in South Africa and I was very fortunate to meet old experienced folks during my 20`s who mentored me into knowing the right path I need to follow in my IT career. My dream was nurtured in a way that confidence is now driving me into establishing a Global IT firm that aims to embrace skills development and mentoring, IT Governance Advisory, and Business Analysis.

Having acquired a couple of International certifications too, my decision to embark on an MBA at Varsity XXX will cement my thoughts and vision to change economically challenged businesses and countries at large. Having a bird`s eye insight to business needs require a very flexible and steady mind. With the advent of Cloud computing and the ever-changing trends, the exponential drop in internet data charges can be utilized at the advantage of poor nations to promote IT skills sets in most communities and drive innovation towards change.

During my work experience l have discovered that many business are struggling to make sound decisions due to lack of adequate insights. With Business intelligence l can help Business owners, Managers and potential tomorrow`s ambassadors to gather insights with less effort , time and cost through leveraging the cloud platform. I am glad to be an IT expert and a fan of technology and I strongly believe that I can change this world to be a better and friendly place. My journey through the MBA courseware will improve my thinking and the way I perceive Global success.

The story cannot change problems, but maybe your story includes experiences that prepare you to solve some them..

Having acquired a couple of International certifications too , my ... It's good if you go through the essay and delete all words that are unnecessary/unhelpful, like this one.

...decision to embark on an MBA at Varsity XXX will cement my... Nice use of the word cement, good idea.

... thoughts and vision to change economically challenged businesses and countries at large.--- Can you be more specific? I think this is where you can improve the whole essay. Don't just say you want to help 'improve'... instead, give specific examples of what you'd like to do.. solutions you propose based on your research and experience.

Again, delete unnecessary words: During my work experience l have discovered...

Good luck with this!! It's impressive.

Thanx EF_Kevin for your contributions.Will work on it and do adjustments.