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How can I transform this sentence into active voice (from passive)


youngeebs   4 / 21
  Jan 10, 09, 07:06pm  #
This is the sentence that I want to change but I cannot think of a way to do it without changing the meaning of it.

My father did not seem to be bothered by their insolence as he taught, but I knew that deep down, he was very morose.

Ibrahim Yucel
 
psitutor   0 / 6
  Jan 10, 09, 07:10pm  #
take out "to be"

charmayne paul
 
youngeebs   4 / 21
  Jan 10, 09, 09:05pm  #
thanks. yeah i didn't think of it, and it still sounds well

Ibrahim Yucel
 
EF_Kevin [Moderator]  1 / 3496
  Jan 11, 09, 12:49pm  #
No, no, this is the way to make it active:

Their insolence did not seem to bother my father as he taught, but I knew that, deep down, he was very morose.

You make it active by switching it around. Can you see how it feels more powerful this way? That is why the active voice is better. Good question!!

Kevin, EssayForum.com
 
youngeebs   4 / 21
  Jan 11, 09, 02:25pm  #
oh i see now. well thanks to both of you. I've always had problems with this.

Ibrahim Yucel
 

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