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Does this sentence about the novel make sense?

  Jan 3, 09, 09:45am  #
The novel focuses on a series of unfortunate events afflicted on the Logan family.
 
  Jan 3, 09, 10:25am  #
It makes sense to me!

Disclaimer: I'm only a high school student, so take my opinions lightly!

Glenn Fisher
 
  Jan 3, 09, 06:38pm  #
Yep! I got the point!

Constance, EssayForum Contributor
 
EF_Kevin [Moderator]
  Jan 4, 09, 03:40pm  #
I would change to:

The novel focuses on a series of unfortunate events by which the Logan family is afflicted.

Kevin, EssayForum.com
 

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