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sentence structure question


michel92   6 / 10
  Nov 23, 08, 08:14pm  #
hi gloria! thnk you in advance. here are a couple of sentences that I do not know if are coeherent:

My family was delighted.
"Just like your father... a manager, huh? It's good that you'll do Business as usual" (And just to think I had considered, many years ago, art as a career option...)
Everything was settled then

Michel schoemaker
 
EF_Team5 [Moderator]  0 / 2702
  Nov 24, 08, 05:09pm  #
Good afternoon :)

All three of these sentences make sense and are coherent. As far as mechanics, there are a couple of errors:

"Just like your father... a manager, huh? It's good that you'll do business as usual!" (And just think I had considered, many years ago, art as a career option...)

Regards,
Gloria
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