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Fragment sentence<<<need correct


so lonely 1-1  Oct 8, 08, 12:14pm  #
Hi ,

I have Some fragment sentence..Can you help me to correct them!!

1- The desire of all humankind to live in peace and freedom, For example.
2-Altough people want to believe that all men are created equal.

I need an independent clause to correct this fragment.

MeMe
 
EF_Team5 [Moderator] 0-2702  Oct 8, 08, 05:08pm  #
Good afternoon.

Without seeing the context these sentences are in, I'm not sure how much help I can be. Here are my suggestions:

"1- The desire of all humankind to live in peace and freedom; for example...
2-Although people want to believe that all men are created equal,..."

Regards,
Gloria
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