nhamalawy, #1:
"Share something about yourself to help the Admissions Committee develop a more complete picture of who you are."
Your trying to make your essay better by getting professional advice (
note we do not write anything for the student) actually shows you will most likely become an important asset of any academic organization.
nhamalawy, #1:
what if admissions committee checks for plagiarism by typing a paragraph from my essay... won't this very post I'm writing now come in the search results? won't they know if I wrote the essay entirely by myself or had some help?
Again, if you you ask us to write an essay for you, we won't help you :). Whatever you write is your own work.
If admissions committee finds your posts by doing an online search, he/she will click on the "Member" link and will notice that you, named X Y, were in fact the original author of the essay. Even though now it appears you have ignored our recommendation and didn't fill out the "First and Last name" fields yet..
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