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how can i make a good introduction? essay about myself


Mizuhashi 1 / 1  
Apr 27, 2014   #1
only 300 words it's all bout myself :v
can i start like this ?

I have been meditating when our teacher said that we will make an essay about ourselves. I asked myself, "did i change since i was a child?, what kind of person i am now ?, Who i am ? "

something like that as an introduction?
Itsyasmeens 2 / 10  
Apr 27, 2014   #2
Hey, when it comes to writing an essay about yourself then I guess it should be written this way.. I don't know if its a different thing for you but I hope this helps :)

Introduction:
My name is [insert you full name] and I'm [insert your age]. There are many things about me but those are few main points I would like to mention about myself.

Middle:
One of the many things I love to do in my free time is ice hockey and I've been doing in for [insert the amount of time you've been doing it for]. I am on the team crew and I really enjoy it. Some of the things I really like about it are [insert the things you like about about it].

I have rather wide variety of pets which include a cat named [insert name], dog called [insert name], gecko who's name is [insert name] as well as fish and other really interesting animals.

The main reason why I came to this school is because of my brother. He went to this school and once I went with him to one of the events that was going on I found that I really liked this school and wanted to attend it too.

I participate in health tech class for school and my goal is to do as well as possible in in throughout the year.
My favorite genre of music is [insert genre you like] and my favorite songs and artists include [insert list of your favorite songs and artists]. I like it because [insert a reason why you like it].

The person I admire the most and found to be my role model is [insert the name of your role model]. This is because [insert a reason].

Ending:
Those are some of the many things about myself and facts about me form my personal point of view
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Apr 27, 2014   #3
also, in introduction, I suggest you how you can compose it to attract the reader's attention, so the readers will feel curious to read more
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 29, 2014   #4
Overall, an intro should describe the contents of the essay in a clear manner as to attract the attention of the readers to the essay topic and organization. As always, Google is the best friend. Everything you can find there.
OP Mizuhashi 1 / 1  
May 1, 2014   #5
As a student I have a lot of questions going around my mind. I have been talking to myself asking , " Did I change since I was a little child ?, What kind of person I am now ?, Who I am ? What is special about me ? Am I worth it ?". Many of us ask different things ourselves.

My name is Sherabie Aseras, I am 14 yrs. Like other people I have some obstacle in life but im doing my best to overcome it. The old me is demure, innocent, always asking for my mother help and following her instruction. What I am now is a different person an opposite .I am what each day of my life changes me. Having someone who motivates you, supports you and take care of you changes something. Something really special that makes you believe that you can achieve beyond your wildest dream. Being special to someone makes you already a special one. Even though some people do not recognize your capabilities, manifest them your capabilities to do things because we are worth it. Our ambition helps us to set our goals in life and the supports, motivations, determinations, trust in yourself and love to God helps us to accomplish it. Making decisions is hard for me you should think it over and over again to avoid consequences.

I am a normal person with an ambition in life. we all have our own uniqueness that makes us take the spotlight in our life. Problem is just an obstacle that we can jump on.

uhmmm is this alright ? :x
im not really good at writing things :v
please help :)
Thank you
ecneics 2 / 3  
May 1, 2014   #6
Begin with introduce your name. Be brief, let the reader know clearly what are you going to discuss. Goodluck :)
shash2014 - / 1  
May 9, 2014   #7
i could not articulate or structure the essay just looking the title , what should i do to structure the whoe essay first in my mind and then start the essay ..Regards
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
May 10, 2014   #8
My name is Sherabie Aseras, I am 14 yrs.

Bad grammar.
My name is Sherabie Aseras with 14 years old

Like other people I have some obstacle in life but im doing my best to overcome it

Like other people, I have faced some obstacles in my life, but I always overcame them in my best way.


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