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Difficulties in formulating policy to stop objectionable practices


ailee123 1 / -  
Nov 4, 2012   #1
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Question: What are the difficulties in formulating foreign policy to stop objectionable practices?

Foreign policy making in central and southwest Asia, especially in Afghanistan, has been a complex process in history. There are so many variables that make foreign policy making even more complex than it should be such as anti-American sentiments, tribal loyalties, and cultural differences. The documentary, Obama's War, shows the United States' marine soldiers attempting to protect the Afghan citizens from the Taliban; at the same time, they are trying to assassinate the leaders of Al-Qaeda, a global terrorist network, and the Taliban by doing night raids and inspections. Although it seems like the soldiers and United States government have a clear objective in Afghanistan, this documentary reveals that these foreign policies are ambiguous and extremely difficult to carry out due to these factors.

Although the United States creates foreign policies that protects Americans and others around the world from the threat of terrorism, there are some countries like Afghanistan and Pakistan that are tired of United States' interference and presence which makes foreign policy making even more difficult. Their frustrations results to huge anti-American sentiments and elevates anger and tension among the people in these countries. In the documentary, there is a segment when an Afghan male expresses his frustration with the United States' soldiers because they pull out innocent civilians from their homes. He states how they have no respect for their culture and privacy, which makes him want to join the Taliban. Many other civilians feel the same way. Furthermore, after the Bush Administration installs a corrupt puppet government with Hamid Karzai as the President in December 2004, many more civilians feel hatred towards the United States. The level of corruption increases tremendously during Karzai's presidency; he appoints warlords and drug and sex traffickers to work with him. As a result, many civilians turn to the Taliban because they offer their own shadow government with laws, order, and protection, unlike President Karzai's government.

As people start to turn their backs against the United States and Afghanistan's government, they add more terrorists and increases the difficulties in formulating successful foreign policies to stop them. Due to so much anti-American sentiments, many civilians begin to join the Taliban which makes them stronger. The whole purpose in this war is to prevent the Taliban from returning to power and allowing Al-Qaeda to proliferate. However, the plan is not working at all. As more troops enter Afghanistan, there is more resistance from the population. The more night raids and inspections troops perform to find Taliban or Al-Qaeda members, many civilians lie to protect them. If civilians cannot be on the United States' side, formulating a foreign policy is nearly impossible.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Nov 14, 2012   #2
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As people start to turn their backs against the United States and Afghanistan's government, they add more terrorists and increases the difficulties in formulating successful foreign policies to stop themprevent terrorism .

Due to so much anti-American sentiments, many civilians begin to join the Taliban which makes them stronger than before .

As more troops enter Afghanistan, there is more resistance from the populationnative Afgans .

The more night raids and inspections troops perform to find Taliban or Al-Qaeda members, manythe more civilians liewould be there to protect them.

If civilians cannot be on the United States' side, formulating a foreign policy is nearly impossible.

I think it's better to end with a strong cliche':
Therefore winning the hearts of Afgan people is a crucial factor for USA to formulate a successful foreign policy for Afganistan.


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