What i want to be in life

Hey guys I have to write a final for my fifth period class, and the topic is mainly on my three career interests. Well, I really want to blow my teacher away with an outstanding essay but, I want to know if someone can review it for me and tell me what I need to work so I can fix any mistakes. :]


Im still in High school but don't hesitate to be harsh

Greetings!

I'd be happy to help you with it! Just post it here and I'll give you my editing suggestions!

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com