is this thesis statement about music good?

Music is everywhere, we listen to music throughout our lives, there are many type of music, such as rock & roll, classical, country, marching band and operas.

or should i write more? my essay is about classifaction/divide essay

Good afternoon.

This thesis statement is probably a bit too narrow. As it is, I cannot tell what it is going to be about, as all you have provided is a broad definition. As this is, it's not really a thesis statement but rather an opening sentence, a "hook" to get readers interested. Your thesis should start out broad and then narrow down to the exact statement near the end, much like a funnel. You should include something about classification and division in the essay, and a great amount of detail as to what you will be classifying or dividing.

I hope this helps.

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Gloria
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