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A subject to introduce myself -- engineering


yash123 1 / 1  
Mar 18, 2010   #1
Hi,
I am Yash. I am from Vapi, Gujarat. Basically I belongs to Madhya Pradesh. I am Living with my uncle in Vapi.
I am student of 12 th standerd in Fellowship Missiom School, Vapi.
I intrested in playing chess, cricket, meeting with new friend, visit to new places.
I intrested to become an engineer.

pls give me help for subject to introduce your self.
djanat 19 / 29  
Mar 18, 2010   #2
My name is Yash, twenty three-year-old. i am from....
as a student of ... .i spent much of my time in.... and in,,,,,,,.
i live with my uncle who has a home/house(you have to choose one of them ), in...
my hobbies are several, playing chess,cricket and traveling. i am a social person who likes to meet new people in order to exchange ideas and opinions about diver topics.

my goal in life is to become an engineer who has the ability to... and...

good luck
pinkchance 1 / 2  
Mar 19, 2010   #3
I think what you have done is pretty good, however if you want to make this introducion better you should introduce something about yourself that's kinda personal but not too personal; enough to make you stand out from the rest of the crowd who are doing the same thing. Something about you that makes people want to remember you. Wish you luck :)
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 19, 2010   #4
Djana, that was very nice of you!
Sisi, I agree with your advice about making a distinct impression.

Yash, you can find a lot of examples online. Google this:
Letter of introduction example

You can see a lot of different ways to make sentences in English. For example, you can write:

I am a serious student with an interest in engineering. I like the way engineering combines art and science. (continue to write about engineering)

Start a NEW PARAGRAPH:
I live with my uncle in Vapi, Gujarat and attend Fellowship Missiom School. In my classes, I always enjoyed learning about physical science and planning my future as a (mechanical?) engineer.

:-) Use a new paragraph for every idea.
OP yash123 1 / 1  
Mar 20, 2010   #5
Thanks all of you for advice.

PLs guide me about prepare c.v.
pls tell me that points comes first and so on

as
1-objective
2-qualification
3-experiance
4-project work
5-personal detail
6-hobbies
7-reference
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 22, 2010   #6
All you have to do is type Curriculum Vitae into Google and read the instructions you find. You can find examples to follow, too.
Google this:
Curriculum Vitae example

The other good thing to know is how to grab the reader's attention with a clear first sentence about each point.
sentence 1: Make the point clearly in a sentence that is not too long.
sentence 2: give an example.
sentence 3: tell why it is important.


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