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Sentences about Anorexia Nervosa


hunnybun39 11-57  Mar 8, 08, 11:22am  #
Hello just need to check if these sentences make sense.

1. Anorexia Nervosa, a major psychiatric illness occuring mainly in adolescents, accompanies with the intense fear of becoming obese and refusal of food, although hungry.

2. The prevelance rate for anorexia shows a high rate for adults and adolescents

Naima Mussarat
 
EF_Team2 [Moderator] 2-2254  Mar 9, 08, 04:04am  #
Greetings!

I think you're off to a good start, but I might suggest a slight change:

1. Anorexia Nervosa, a major psychiatric illness occuring mainly in adolescents, is accompanied by an intense fear of becoming obese and a refusal to eat, despite being hungry.

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