Paragragh about Comparison & Contrast (computer and typewriter)

can you help me to make a paragraph,..here's paragraph i made..i need your help...

I think maybe you forgot to post the paragraph you want help with. Post what you've written and we'll be glad to help.

COMPUTER AND TYPEWRITER
The computer is the one electric to using a lot.If you use the computer you learn a lot and how to use and how to make.But with the typewriter it easy to use because they don't have a mouse.Both type machine make a letter.The computer is able to create any kind of letter with any color and change the font size of the letters,while, the typewriter is only big letter and small letter and only one color.The computer to be able to create any program.The typewriter if you type a wrong spelling in the paper you need to use the correction fluid or eraser.Finally the computer is able to edit the wrong spelling and grammar.But the typewriter you cannot edit the spelling and you cannot insert the sentences while the computer able to create any kind.The computer is a good electric for all people and we need to learn how to use to computer.

First, you should probably compare a word processing program to a typewriter, rather than a computer to a typewriter. Otherwise, all the extra functionality of the computer makes the comparison pointless. Second, you should probably elaborate on your points a bit more, possibly even expanding it from one paragraph into several (a proper essay, even). What exactly were the assignment criteria? Were you asked to just write one paragraph, or is this meant as an introduction?

ok thank you very much.

what do you mean by using the phrase "....one electric?"
electric device maybe but even then?
maybe googling computers and typewriters can help you

The computer is the electric device used most in the 21st century. If you use the computer you learn a lot, and how to use and how to make. but with the typewriter it is easy to use because it does not have a mouse. Both types of machine can make a letter. The computer is able to create any kind of letter with any color and change the font size of the letters, while the typewriter offers only upper-case and lower-case letters, all a single color. The computer is able to correct any mistake, but with the typewriter if you type a wrong spelling in the paper you need to use the correction fluid or eraser. In addition to the fact that the computer is able to edit the wrong spelling and grammar, it also enables the user to create computer programs. But with the typewriter you cannot edit the spelling and you cannot insert the sentences while the computer able to create any kind.The computer is a good electric for all people and we need to communicate in a powerful way.