I'm writing a 3k Philosophy paper on epistemology, about justification.
Could someone please tell me if this is a good thesis, or what I can do to make it better?
"In this paper I will show that the justification component of the traditional tripartite theory is insufficient to accurately establish knowledge. To demonstrate this, I will make use of Gettier examples, and show where the traditional use of justification fails to serve as a true indicator of knowledge, or lack of it. Finally, I will propose a revised view of what I think would fit better to serve as justification on the tripartite model."
I'm not if it even is a thesis, i've never been good at writing these...