formatting and proper content - I need a peer review for a research paper

I am in need of a peer review for my research paper. Area's that I have concern with are formatting and proper content. I struggled writing this paper because I was unclear on how to write the paper. Any corrections and guidance is appreciated.

Where is your research paper? You need to upload it for us to provide you with any sort of advice, guidance or suggestions. You have not even told us the research topic for us to provide you with a skeleton form guideline even :D

Do your first draft and post it here. We will help you improve your research paper :)

Yes, He is right :D
If you think that you need some feedback, you post your writing as a preliminary draft here. Or, if you don't want to post it, use this site to look at other peoples' essays for ideas.

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I need to have a peer review done on my research paper draft. Any advice would be helpful and I am also looking for additional help on my citation transitions. Thank you.

What is your major?
What is your paper about?

You did not say anything about your draft !!!

Any help in regards to my thesis, body structure and overall understanding of my research would be appreciated. This is for English 102

Hi! It's great that you care enough about your writing to spend time asking for a critique. Where is the thesis?

One of the ideas I think is most important is to spent plenty of time on the Lit Review before trying to write the introduction. And the thesis statement really should be written last. Some people try to write it first. That is okay if they know their topic really well, but in general when you come up with a thesis statement first and then try to find research to support it, you are sending your self on an unnecessary scavenger hunt. It's better to dedicate all your attention to the Lit Review and then see what ideas emerge naturally.