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Start by dwelling for a while on that moment. What was it? For me, it was getting beaten up by 6 kids that were older than I was -- while my shoelaces were tangled in the wheels of my bike!!
When you know that moment, and you know how to
connect it with your college aspiration somehow, write a topic sentence for one of the paragraphs. The topic sentence is the main point of a paragraph. Develop that into a whole paragraph by elaborating on it, and then conclude that paragraph. Each para is a single idea expressed beautifully. Finish off that solid, rhythmic paragraph, and then look it over.
Repeat that process until you have a few beautiful paragraphs, and they will be your body paragraphs. When you read them all together, what main theme do they convey? Whatever it is, present it in an intro paragraph that you'll tack on to the beginning.
Finally, write a thoughtful, entertaining conclusion that leaves the reader with something to think about.
I hope that helps you!!
Kevin, EssayForum.com