I need help to write a classification essay about shopper

greetings!!

In fact i have some problems in classification essay writing. In fact the problem i can not categorizing the topic into principles. Sometimes i could divided it but my principle is not general that i can supporting my idea in the body paragraph, asa u can see that make my essay very weak, am i a right?

Now I have this topic "shopper" if I divided it to three categories base on them habit into: intelligent shopper, impassive shopper and Window shopper, do u think it is good idea.

I'm waiting for ur help as soon as possible because i have an exam in writing in the end of this week.

thank you.

Greetings!

It sounds to me as if your categories are very good ones! That will make it an interesting essay with clearly-defined categories.

I cannot "see" that your essay is weak, because you have not posted it here. ;-)) If you'd like to do so, I'd be happy to take a look at it.

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com

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Thank you Sarah. In fact it will pleasure me when you will help me in my essay. Sarah before I start writing my essay i want to look in my supporing.


I think about how to support my idea but I do not fined good supporting sentenses. In the end I look if I can write about thier habit, the advantage for it and the disadvantage. that what I can find but I hope if you have any idea tp help me.


also if i have any mistake in my sturacture or my spelling, I wich to correct them.



thanks

Greetings!

Your ideas are good ones! You'll want to start by defining the different classes. What is an intelligent shopper, an impassive shopper and a window shopper? Then, as you said, describe their habits. Then talk about their advantages and disadvantages if there are both for each category. Are there disadvantages to being an intelligent shopper? Perhaps there are some--maybe an intelligent shopper really does her homework before shopping, but doesn't have as much fun as someone who is more impulsive. By the way, did you mean "impassive shopper" or "impulsive shopper"? I have not heard of "impassive" shopping, but we've all made impulse buys.

I'd be happy to help you with your grammar and spelling once you have written a rough draft. Be sure to use the spell-checker in your word processing program before you post your essay; it will cut down on the number of corrections that need to be made.

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com

Greetings!!



This is my essay.

The Shopper



Do you like shopping? Everyone likes shopping but everyone has his own personality when he goes to shopping. Actually I like shopping. Every weekend I call my friend to go shopping but in fact the hate to go out with me because I do not buy any thing. Actually it is my habit whenever I go for shopping. Although, most of my friend don't buy any thing but I do not know why they like to call me miser man. There r three types of shopper such as intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and windows shopper when it come to their habit.

The first type of shopper "intelligent shopper" is the best type of shopper. Actually, intelligent shopper used to make plane when they decided to go fro shopping. He goes directly to buy his needs and come back directly; he does not lose so long time in the shop. In fact, intelligent shopper saves his money and his time. He does not buy something that he does not need it also he does not spend most of time in the shop. In the other hand, sometimes this kind of shopper thinks about money more than their desire. For example, intelligent shopper sometimes likes to buy something it maybe force him in the shopping buy he will not buy it because he does not make plane for it and be scarily about the money. Therefore intelligent shopper is an anxious person and all his thought about the money.

The second type of shopper is the impulsive shopper. Actually this type of shopper is careless about money and he buys whatever he wants. Although, he make plane before he go shopping, he buys anything admire him. Actually an impulsive shopper enjoys himself by buying every thing and he try to make him happy. He does not care about money. But he loses his money by buying things he does not need them. Most of times, he fells sadness, he also through it a way. This is the reason to call them impulsive shopper.

The last type of shopper is that one he does not buy any thing. You can call this type by silly shopper. In fact this shopper goes for shopping more than the other shopper but he is expressing than the other when they buy. Actually the last one he does not buy any thing, he also think all the time about the money. Although he goes for shopping and enjoy himself in the shop, he does not lost his money any way. In the other hand, when he admire some think, he get confuse to buy it or not. In fact he could not decide immediately. Therefore windows shopper prefers hung around that go shopping and he like the money ore than any thing also.

To sum up, there three types of shopper are intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and windows shopper. The intelligent shopper likes to arrange his schedules when he goes shopping. In the other hand the impulsive shopper he does not think about the money he just buy whatever he likes. Not to those two shoppers is the window shopper who goes shopping without spending the money. Actually, I hope everyone to be an intelligent shopper.




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alashmori

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Actually, I do not know what to say I know that I used to be late to pass my essay but those days I had an exam so sorry for late.


By the way that is my passage between your hand I hope u interesting it and I know that my hand writing is so bad specially in the grammar so I hope you to correct them, also after you correct them I wish from you to explain for my why it correct like this.


Thanks any way

Greetings!

I'm happy to help you with some editing suggestions, although there is a limit to how much in-depth editing help we can give on this free site. Here are some suggestions for you:

Do you like shopping? - It's usually best not to address the reader this way, and not to use second person ("you").

Everyone likes shopping but everyone has his own shopping personality.- You could just say "when he goes shopping" but this is more interesting.

Actually I like shopping. Every weekend I call my friend to go shopping but in fact the hate to go out with me - I think you meant "he hates to go out with me"; be sure to proofread carefully.

because I do not buy anything. Actually it is my habit whenever I go shopping.

Although, most of my friend don't buy any thing but I do not know why they like to call me miser man. - This sentence does not really belong in your essay. Don't tell a story about yourself if you are supposed to be writing a classification essay.

There are three types of shopper such as intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and window shopper when it comes to their buying habits. - If you say there are three types, do not say "such as"; that implies there are more than three.

The first type of shopper, "intelligent shopper," is the best type of shopper. The intelligent shopper makes plans before going shopping.

He goes directly to buy his needs and comes back directly; he does not stay a long time in the shop.

He does not buy something that he does not need. - The next part you have already said, so delete "also he does not spend most of time in the shop."

On the other hand, sometimes this kind of shopper thinks about money more than his desire.

For example, intelligent shopper sometimes likes to buy something it maybe force him in the shopping buy he will not buy it because he does not make plane for it and be scarily about the money. - This sentence does not make sense. Perhaps you meant "The intelligent shopper might be tempted to buy something that is not on his list, but worries that he will spend too much money." You can then delete the next sentence.

The second type of shopper is the impulsive shopper. Actually, this type of shopper is careless about money and he buys whatever he wants. Although, he makes plans before he goes shopping, he buys anything he admires. Actually an impulsive shopper enjoys himself by buying everything to make himself happy. He does not care about money. But he loses his money by buying things he does not need. Most of the time, he feels bad about throwing his money away. This is why he is called an impulsive shopper.

The last type of shopper is that one he does not buy any thing. You can call this type by silly shopper. - You have already said that you are going to talk about the window shopper; do not call it by a different name here.

In fact this shopper goes for shopping more than the other shopper but he is expressing than the other when they buy. - this last phrase does not make sense.

Actually- the word "actually" does not add anything to your essay; don't use it so much.

the window shopper does not buy anything; he also thinks all the time about the money. Although he goes shopping and enjoys himself in the shop, he does not lose any money.

In the other hand,- The expression is "On the other hand," but it really does not fit here

when he admires something, he has trouble deciding whether to buy it or not. In fact he cannot decide immediately. Therefore, the window shopper prefers hung around that go shopping and he like the money ore than any thing also. - This last part does not make sense, but I think you meant to say, "the window shopper prefers to just hang around looking at merchandise without spending any money."

To sum up, there are three types of shopper: intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and window shopper. The intelligent shopper likes to arrange his schedules when he goes shopping. In contrast, the impulsive shopper does not think about the money; he just buys whatever he likes. Finally, there is the window shopper who goes shopping without spending any money.

Actually, I hope everyone to be an intelligent shopper. - Again, you don't need to bring yourself into it. You could say, "With a little planning and self-control, everyone could be an intelligent shopper."

You have a way to go with your English, but if you keep working hard, you'll improve quickly! Keep up the good work!

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com