Need help with thesis for 'belonging' essay please!

Hi there,

Here is the question:

How do composers construct perspectives of belonging in texts?

How does the text represent barriers which prevent belonging or choices not to belong?

I need two different theses to show these. Any ideas? (Is it through the use of techniques e.g. alliteration, personification or...?)

Thanks!

You say you "need help," but you seem to mean "want someone to supply the answers." This won't do at all. Post your own attempt to create the two thesis statements first, then we can help you revise them for clarity.

To my view, i will post my essay for revisions because it is the best way to receive feedback to improve the thesis.