Need Help for my essay ..about person I admire

Hello everyone ...

Well,..that's my second essay i am writing this semester because i just get started weeks ago ...and i hate writing because i'm not good at it,but i have to keep trying and my first Language is Arabic so that why i found it hard ..most problem i have to get ideas especially during class period.. i have problems in punctuation.and vocabulary i used basic stuff i need strong and meaningful vocabulary...so i wish i could find help here and what i have to do to improve my writing ..Thanks

First off, capitalize the personal pronoun "I" when you are writing. Second, at least try to use punctuation correctly. Simply separating your thoughts with ellipses isn't a good habit to get into when you know you will not be able to do that on your assignments. Beyond that, reading a lot is probably the single most important thing you can do to improve your writing.