I NEED HELP BADLY " Essay about why should i get into this college "

I need help!!!!!!!!

Im havign a hard time getting into my college of choice and i they told me 2 write a essay about why should i be allowed in basted on my grades and myself. My grades are just barly good enoff to get in and i need help with the inrto and everything else but i cant even get a sentence out. all i got and its not that great i think is " It took four years to finish high school and the only thing I can think aobut all those four years was going to college. "

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I spent four years in High school preparing for my future and going to college will be my last step in reaching my goal. I was very active in extra school activities and sports.

ITs a eassy about why i should get into college. It for the admissions guy at my college .

can someone plz help me out .

I spent four years in High school preparing for my future, going to college will be my last step in reaching my goal. I was very active in extra school activities and sports. I have hade a great four years in high school and i am more then excited to go to college. Basted on my grades and extra school activities I feel I would be a great addition to blank college.


plz write back about wa u think about my intro and how i can improve it . :)

Good morning.

What is it about this particular school that interests you the most? What area do you wish to study? Why is that? What is it that you dreamed about exactly, all through your high school years? Why do you feel you are prepared to make this step?

These are the things admissions want to see in these essays; they probably have many applicants, and those who have a plan for the future and what they are going to use their education for have a better chance of getting in.

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Gloria
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yea that kind of helps but the essay need to be about my grades and since my grades arnt that great and barly good enoff to get into the college it hard to talk about them. Like i cant say yea my average ws a 79 threwout high school because even doe its ok it dont make me look to good.

Well, then you need to write about the good points on your record. What subjects were you best at? What did you receive the highest marks in?

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Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com