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Help on Humanities paper (Gregorian chant)


mandymoore 10-13  Oct 19, 07, 03:07pm  #
I need help on Humanities paper. I am not sure I didn't make any mistake. thank you
The original Gregorian chant creator is Charlemagne (742-814) who is emperor of the Roman Empire in Saint Peter's Basilica. He was an essentially contributed person an art, education and music. He brought monks from Rome to stabilize and reform church music. This authority may tell how much he liked the church music. Roman music represented one tradition- later called Gregorian chant.

Gregorian chant was monophonic which is, one or many voices sang a single melodic line. While I was listening the snippets of Gregorian chant, I realized that they had not used any instrumental at that time. But sounds like amazing. Moreover, it's relaxing, no worries, and tranquility. The chant sung by men and women who got extremely strong voice. Another word is song created in capella.

In modern time, doctors may suggest to listen this music for who meditate. I could tell that song for relaxation, meditation, stress reduction, pain relief or tapping into one's soul. The song puts the people in a place where they feel very presence of God. I'm truly enjoyed.

Jenifer Lopez
 
EF_Team2 [Moderator] 2-2254  Oct 19, 07, 07:54pm  #
Greetings!

I'd be happy to help you with some editing tips! Most of the errors I see are grammatical.

The original creator of Gregorian chant was Charlemagne (742-814) who was emperor of the Roman Empire in Saint Peter's Basilica. [Note: The way you have written this, it sounds like the Roman Empire was located in St. Peter's Basilica, rather than spread throughout Europe.] He was an important contributor of art, education and music. [I think this must be what you meant; I'm not sure.] He brought monks from Rome to stabilize and reform church music. This authority may tell how much he liked the church music. Roman music represented one tradition- later called Gregorian chant.

Gregorian chant was monophonic which is [delete ,] one or many voices singing a single melodic line. While I was listening to the snippets of Gregorian chant, I realized that they had not used any instruments at that time. [I think you should delete "But sounds like amazing." which is a sentence fragment and not grammatical.] Moreover, it's relaxing, [delete "no worries,"] and tranquil. The chant was sung by men and women who had extremely strong voices. Another word for this type of song is a capella.

In modern times, doctors may suggest listening to this music for those who meditate. I could use Gregorian chant for relaxation, meditation, stress reduction, pain relief or tapping into one's soul. The song puts the people in a place where they feel the very presence of God. I truly enjoyed it.

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