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yangzomThreads: 2
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Author: tashi yangzom
   
May 6, 2010, 05:55pm   #1
hello everyone, could you please write an essay about the above topic.
Today, i went to take GED writing test. Thats my second writing test. My first one got a 0 marks. Its because of misunderstanding the topic. This time, i have no idea.....weather i will pass or fail. I am so nervous.
The above topic is the GED test writing essay. If u don't mind to jot some essay about this topic. So, i can learn from my mistake or i will think to take ESL class instead of wasting my time to take GED. I just need a good options!... please let me know about my English writing too.. my most weakness is, i don't read book at all. My laziness!
Whoever put me some tips, i am very much appreciated! thanks!



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Author: H.B.Sadikhova
   
May 8, 2010, 07:35am   #2
Hi, Tashi
yangzom:
hello everyone, could you please write an essay about the above topic.

I don't think this is possible, because the overall objective of this forum, as I understood during my activity here, is to encourage students to write themselves, thereby developing their writing skills.
You should write an essay yourself, if you want to improve your writing.

yangzom:
If u don't mind to jot some essay about this topic. So, i can learn from my mistake

How can you become aware of your mistakes, if you don't write anything? Prepare a draft and place it here. Moderators and members of the forum will provide feedbacks to your essays, indicating your omissions and correcting your mistakes. Be sure that no essay will remain unchecked. Only by this way you will be able to learn from your mistakes. And it realy works!

yangzom:
my most weakness is, i don't read book at all. My laziness!

this may be the dominant reason that affects your writing. you ought to overcome your laziness and read as much as you can. You can do this by reading essays of other forum members as well, since some of them are very good source of information. Do not copy them, though; try to develop your own ideas and style.

Do not afraid of writing! The most difficult part is to begin; the rest will come with persistence!
good luck :)


EF_KevinThreads: 33
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May 8, 2010, 04:29pm   #3
Hi Tashi,

If you will not read to practice the language, then you will not succeed in passing the test. Other students spend time reading, and their skill will improve. I hope you will write some sentences and let us try to correct them for you. That is the only way to learn.

Do you understand the question?
What would you do if you were given a million dollars? What organizations would you help? If you are too lazy to read, you probably do not even know about many organizations.

I would like to help you, but only if you will use some effort. Write an essay, and we will help you to identify your errors and improve your skill.


yangzomThreads: 2
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Author: tashi yangzom
   
May 10, 2010, 06:30pm   #4
Hi Kevin,
Thank You for your concern about my English. I will try to read more as much as i could and write too.


yangzomThreads: 2
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Author: tashi yangzom
   
May 10, 2010, 07:42pm   #5
If i have a million dollar than, i would definitely love to donate to the organizations.
The reason why i choose organization is because In this world, they are many people who are suffering and desperate in needs of help.

Organization that i choose is the "Orphan Children Organization".
Children who does not have parents and no place to lived. Although i cannot be their real parents but at least, i could help them to bring out of the bad situations. By offering them a good educations, healthy foods and taking care of their life.

Helping these Orphan Children Organization makes my life reasonable and a kind human being. Finally, I would like to suggest to the rich people that never try to waste your money for nothing. Its better you help to the people who needs you. That will brought you a true meaning of life and happiness!


EF_KevinThreads: 33
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May 12, 2010, 09:04am   #6
If I had a million dollars, than then I would definitely love to donate to the charitable organizations. The reason why i choose to help charitable organization is because in this world, there are many people who are suffering and in desperate need of help.

Organization that i choose is the "Orphan Children Organization".
Children who do not have parents and no place to lived or a place to live need our help. Although I cannot be their real parents, at least, I could help them to escape from the bad situations by offering them a good educations, healthy foods and taking care of their life.

Helping these Orphan Children Organization makes my...

Very nice!!! There are mistakes, but the meaning is clear.

:-)


yangzomThreads: 2
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Author: tashi yangzom
   
May 14, 2010, 05:53pm   #7
Thank You Kevin..




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