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Essay on "GOOD DEED I HAVE DONE IN 2008" Please HELP


Ammaar 1-2  Jan 4, 09, 07:09am  #
PLEASE HELP ME I WANT 3 Paragraph ESSAY ON SUBJECT URGENTLY........? I'm Student of Class 3.......PLEASE HELP ME ON THAT ESSAY WITH THANKS...........

AMMAAR KIANI
 
michael0310 2-10  Jan 4, 09, 01:46pm  #
You have to write the essay first. And even if someone were to write the essay for you, you dind't provide the subject to be written about.

Michael Leonard
 
EF_Kevin [Moderator] 2-3974  Jan 4, 09, 11:05pm  #
First think of a good deed that you did. Explain it to us right here, in this forum, and perhaps we can help you turn it into an essay. Are you trying to learn to write in English? Having difficulty?

Kevin, EssayForum.com
 
Ammaar 1-2 Edited by: Ammaar  Jan 5, 09, 06:32am  #
please my english is not good but i am trying to explain about my feeling and good deed. please write a essay on that and help me with thanks.

I am trying to learn ENGLISH and facing difficulties. but i am trying to explain some thing. one day my mom says me you must have kindness about peoples related or not related you and explain some thing about kindness after that day in my mind always remembers my mom words and start next morning kindness to peoples, I say to my mom in break fast thanks mom and when i drop in school and say to driver thanks and say good morning to my school gate keeper and also my madom and all my class fellows and i meet with all with smiling face and say to every body else 'thank you' for their cooperation with me or any thing else. I help my class falows with their class work and help my madom with their class working. I help with my mom and dad with their home works. I help with my brother and sisters with their home work. I give 2 times morning and evening foods to australian birds 26 which i have in a cage. I enjoy meself and very setisfy. after one month i am on bed due to my illness and my mom and dad check up with doctor and take some medicines. i am on bed atleast 15 days but in these days every body care me my mom dad, sister brother even my class falows and my class madom even my school van driver and school gate keeper. every body care me and feeling me about non meet of mine at school, van and in class warry about me. I feel kindness is very important thing which make every body love with you and get togather and joind.

AMMAAR KIANI
 
EF_Constance 0-240  Jan 5, 09, 09:42am  #
Is this your essay or are you wanting someone to write it for you based on what you just wrote?

Constance, EssayForum Contributor
 
EF_Kevin [Moderator] 2-3974  Jan 5, 09, 03:46pm  #
Here is some help:

One day my mom told me that I must have kindness about people whether they are related or not related to you. She explained something about kindness after that day, and her explanation stayed in my mind. I always remembered my mom's words, and I started each day by practicing kindness in the morning. I say "thanks" to my mom when she makes breakfast, and when arrive at school I say "thanks" to driver and "good morning" to my school gatekeeper. These small acts of kindness brighten people's days.

Congratulations! You do not yet write with "correct" English, but you are fluent in English! I can understand everything you write, and that is a big accomplishment. I wish I was bilingual!

Kevin, EssayForum.com
 
EF_Constance 0-240  Jan 5, 09, 05:17pm  #
I am trying to learn English and facing difficulties, but I am trying to explain some thing. One day, my mom said to me, "You must have kindness about peoples related or not related you and explain some thing about kindness after that day in my mind always remembers my mom words and start next morning kindness to peoples." I thanked my mom, and when I was dropped off at school, I told the bus driver, "Thanks! Good morning." I also greeted my teacher and fellow classmates, meeting them with a smile. I helped my classmates with their work. I also helped my parents with their chores and work at home. I even assisted my siblings with their homework and chores. I feed my caged Australian birds two times per day. I enjoy my life and feel very satisfied.

About a month later, I became ill and had to go to the doctor. I even had to take medicine for my sickness. For over two weeks, I was sick and in bed. Everyone takes care of me and my family. I know they care about me and how I feel.


Constance, EssayForum Contributor
 
EF_Sean [Moderator] 6-3815  Jan 5, 09, 09:48pm  #
The essay at the moment seems to talk more about your general good behavior, rather than about a specific good deed. Try to think of a single act of kindness you can explain in detail, then elaborate on that. Remember, if you can't think of anything for 2008, you can always use one from 2007 or 2006 and just change the details a bit. Or, if you haven't done any good deeds, you are of course free to invent one.

Sean, EssayForum.com
 
4ever2bleed 10-41  Jan 13, 09, 09:31am  #
what good thing did u do in 2008

Nephtalie Pierre
 

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