Teiji 2 / 4 2 Jan 21, 2013 #1Objective: Intentions as a doctor to give back to the communityIn simple terms the passage should say .I want to do research to develop a pharmaceutical drug from the herbs that our forefathers used to in the past as medicamentThank youOur forefathers used a variety of herbs and fruits for curative and preventative purposes which are still effective today.However, to date there are no thorough research that provides scientific data as to its phytotherapic properties.Part of my ambition would be to partner with St.George's University School of Medicine and the government to provide funding, plan and carry out research to discover and identify these plants valuable chemical entity. Aspiring, that it can be developed into a pharmaceutical drug, to provide pharmacologic benefits not only to the Grenadian population but also to the wider world.
hannahsarch 2 / 17 Jan 21, 2013 #2What word count are you aiming for?Our forefathers used a variety of herbs and fruits for curative and preventative purposes still effective today.However, there is no thorough research that provides scientific data to its phytotherapic properties.My ambition is to partner with St.George's University School of Medicine and the government to provide funding and to plan and carry out research towards discovering and identifying these plants' valuable chemical entities. Aspiring, that it can be developed into a pharmaceutical drug, to provide pharmacologic benefits not only to the Grenadian population but also to the wider world.Sorry, I only limited it down 6 words.
fsolano94 16 / 30 Jan 21, 2013 #3I omitted the last sentence from the above (hannasarch) revision as it seemed irrelevant to the rest of the essay. This is just a suggestion and I think you have a good essay as it is. The word count is the problem right? Whats the maximum number of words you can use?Our forefathers used a variety of herbs and fruits for curative and preventative purposes still effective today.However, there is no thorough research that provides scientific data to its phytotherapic properties.My ambition is to partner with St.George's University School of Medicine and the government to provide funding and to plan and carry out research towards discovering and identifying these plants' valuable chemical entities.