Great, I like what you wrote. If you had not written anything, it would have seemed like you were just trying to get out of doing your homework! :)
I think it is worth mentioning how interesting it is that there seems to be little difference in the incomes of people with bachelors vs. masters degrees.
I think it is also worth reflecting on the fact that statistics like the ones that underly this graph are ONLY statistics. Many millionaires have only high school educations. Nevertheless, this is great incentive for all of you students to tough it out and work toward a degree -- rather than stopping after high school.
Kevin, EssayForum.com