yonman:
Through his eyes the world is terrifying place
I do not recall him thinking the world is a terrifying place. Can you give me an example, or examples preferably, when he thought this was the case.
yonman:
Ed Boone: Christopher's dad who is very patient with
^Not always. If you forgot, Ed does say 'fuck' at him quite a bit, and also has been violent with Chris.
yonman:
Judy Boone: Christopher's mother who is very hot tempered
When was she hot tempered?
*For the other people, you can develop on their characteristics if you want to. There is more to say. Also, for Shioban, your sentence needs grammar revision towards the end.
We also see that Mrs Shears is very rude and obviously depressed with life.
This is a very gripping murder mystery, as the writer Mark Haddon takes
you his readers inside the mind of someone who views the world entirely different than most people do. Christopher
was is diagnosed with autism
therefore he adores puzzles and is a great character to investigate the murder of a black poodle, Wellington. ^Because he has autism..he adores puzzles? Autism can range from person to person, I doubt that every autistic person adores puzzles.
His autism however creates severe problems so that if someone has physical contact with him, he would get really angry and become violent.
^Can be rephrased better.
This makes him an interesting detective since he cannot interpret people's emotions beyond what his mentors had taught him, so he must follow certain rules he learned as well as face his own fears to solve the mystery. The simplicity of Haddon's writing creates a descriptive world of what Christopher is going through.
^The simple language does not necessarily describe in great detail the world and what Chris is going through. Rather, readers can see how Chris thinks and how his thought process if just a stream of logic and constant reasoning.
The author writes in a way that you understand how Christopher's mind works and allows the reader to understand what is going on even when Chris is oblivious.
^Replace 'you' with readers. I can see that this point is linked to the one I made earlier...
This short read will go by quickly, but the true meaning of this reading will last much longer.
^Well said ending lol.
Faisal P, Essayforum.com Contributor