ok sorry i am late but i gave the essay to my taecher and it was the first time i took A in but she asks me to write it over, so i hope that you help me edeting :):
My Best Friend and I
[/indent] " My best friend is my mirror," I always say. My best friend, Nora, is my twin and soul mate. People around us always say that we often act like each other. As best friends, Nora and I have a lot of similarities and differences.Nora and I have many similarities. For example, we both have long black hair, brown eyes, and the same skin color. Also, Ahmad is the name of both our brothers. I like Italian food. Nora does, too. Nora and I are equally social, and we like yo have a lot of interaction with people. Moreover, sometimes we buy the same clothes. Nora likes blue just like me. Furthermore, I like romantic movies just like Nora. I study at Dar Al-Hekma College just as Nora. We both have Apple Mac lap tops.
[/indent] Although we have many similarities, Nora and I have some diffrences. For instance, Nora is a very sensitive person, and she easily gets upset. In contrast, I hardly get upset. My sign is Scorpio, while Nora's sign is Pisces.Nora is in Level Two in the CPP, but I am in Level Three. Whhereas Nora is funny person and has the sence of humor, I am more quiet than her. Unlikeme, Nora is lazy and likes to sleep a lot. Nora can take a lot of physical exercises, but I can't. I love tanning very much;on the other hand, Nora doesn't like tanning.In brief, my best friend and I have a lot incommon,yet we are diffrent.During our friendship, I have llearned that best friends must know their similarities and diffrences, so they can deal with each other.
and I have a paragraph also i want you to help me in>>>it is a descriptive paragraph about place: can you correct it for me please?
[/indent] "Room sweet room," Nora says. My best friend's room is a very ornate modren room. As I walk into her room, the warmth of the green and pink walls entrap into a web of love. In the left corner, the wonderful huge bed seems well orgnaized, for its quilt sahpe. On the bed, the silky quilt covers and sweetns the bed. On the top of the bed, the soft pilloes are full of colors; the pillows are stitched "sweet dreams." In front of the bed, there is a funky multicolored rug. In the frontal wall of the bed, the light is streaming and shining in from the squarish glass window. In the right wall, the window is covered by a silky curtain which allows the sunshine to enter the room, for ther is no black out with the curtain.Another interesting thing about her room is her memories which are painted in the gold frame pictures that cover the right pinkish wall. In the right corner, there is a white and pink wooden bookshelf which contain a lot of my best friend's books. On the top of the bookshelf, there is an amazing crystal lamp which makes the room bright. Beside the bookshelf, there is a smaal wooden shelf which has a variegated vanilla candle; I adore it.
In short, I hope that you see the room. Although her bed-room is a simple modern room, it makes you feel comfortable as if you are tasting a piece of heaven.
thank you beforehand :)