Advice on improving expression, sentence structure and flow of an essay.

Hey

I've posted here a while ago, and I found the advice to be very helpful. Who knew that all I had to do to improve my sentence structure was to read my essay out loud. Anyway, I would like some advice on improving expression, sentence structure and flow of an essay. I would also like source material on the rules and conventions in regards to writing sentences.

My teacher told me to improve expression, all one needs to do is to improve expression is to write - is that true?

I desperately need your help, as I may have to do the hardest English subject next year.

Hi!

Do you have an essay for us to look at? If so, post it and I will have a look! Otherwise, go out and find Stephen King's book called On Writing, and it will do amazing things for your writing. For the conventions of style and grammar, look at Strunk and White's The Elements of Style.

I look forward to helping with your essays!!!

Thank you.

I have borrowed the two books, and Elements of Style had an immediate impact. Are there any books that you would recommend for increasing one's analytical skills.