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Jul 11, 2008, 03:07pm   #1
Hi,
I am planning to write an Comparison essay about Spring and Fall weather season. Could please help me about the similarities and differences about these two seasons? Please give some outline points.

Thanks
newworld.

Good afternoon.

I think the first place to start would be to make a list of the ways in which the two seasons are the same. Is there something in your life that happens in the spring as well as the fall? What do these two seasons symbolize? Think about what occurs in the spring and the fall in regards to the life cycle; are there any similarities?
Differences are probably going to be a great deal easier than the things they have in common, so I would start with similarities first.

Regards,
Gloria
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Jul 31, 2008, 05:41pm   #3
Attached on merging: Spring Vs Fall - Need help on my comparision essay

Hello Gloria,

This is my comparison essay. Could you please edit my grammer mistakes ,also give some feed back please? Thanks in advance. My teacher always said "mind your word choices" did I do anything like that in this essay? help me please!

Thanks
newworld.




Spring Vs Fall

Spring is the season between winter and summer. Autumn, or fall, is the season between summer and winter. Both seasons are beautiful; they are often wet. Although there is exquisite beauty in the seasons of Fall and spring, there are also some distinctions there such as, weather, color, activities. I like both seasons, but I prefer the Fall season, because I am from different continent,Asia. Over there we have fall season, but it has a different name called "Autumn". The specialty here is color changing, In my place there is no color change.

In spring, the air begins to warm; temperatures slowly rise as the days get longer. I first came in Chicago during the Spring time. Initially I wasn't impress much, but later years I love spring weather after suffering the cold days of icy weather. Snow and ice melt and more rain tend to fall during this season. I hear the sound of the last frost crackling under my feet. Spring is showery and flowery. Leaves on trees start budding out and turns greening, flowers and grass start growing and blowing, due to the temperatures getting warmer and warmer. Color flowers with nice smell announces the spring to everybody ; we also smell the first cut of grass on a warm spring day. People do gardening in spring time.
Not only me, every body loves to be free and feel light with thin pants and short sleeves in spring. Especially kids love to go out and play. They ride their bikes and if it is a windy day, it would fun to fly kites. Spring is the time for base ball. Most of the children get out their bats and ball. Spring is a busy time for animals; they slept all winter and become active again. A small green frog, on a big brown log; A black and yellow bee, In a little green tree; All sit and listen to red bird sing. Many animals will have their young in the spring, when food is plentiful. Furthermore, their young will have time to grow before experiencing a cold winter themselves. Spring is busy time for people too. Farmers take care of the newborn animals; they plant seeds in the fields. People do swimming and sailing for their pleasure. Totally I can feel the butterflies, swarming around me, landing on me for luck. Who can forget the way lemonade tastes on the first day of spring?
In fall the air begins to cool. So fall season is a cool, frost and sleet weather. Nothing compares to the color of autumn leaves at the peak of their splendor. Leaves of some trees will turn colors such as red, yellow; gold,orange and brown and all they fall off. I love to see the fall color again and again. My first fall season is unforgettable. My husband took me a vacation to looked some fall color in Minneapolis state. The air was turning crisp and cold. So we put on long pants and sleeves and jackets to keep us warm. It was a wonderful experience to see such nice mixed color trees and leaves. First I thought Is bright yellow and orange sun hiding behind the those trees. Wow! It was marvelous! Autumn leaves crunched and crackled under my feet and whooshed and whirled all around me. If winds swoops up, more leaves fell down. There was a big big piles of leaves, I jumped in and hide inside like a child. Leaves were prickled and tickled all over me after that I popped out. The sun went down so early and we wait to saw the big harvest moon; finally the the full moon rose up and up. Even now, I see the fall season on my home whenever I crossed the beautiful picture mounted on the wall. Not only me, everyone likes the magic of the fall color. Some plants bear fruit, such as apple trees; ripe apples falls for eating, baking and caramel apple making. Next interesting thing is pumpkin; I can't think about eating pumpkin pie is delicious and Yum!. People choose a great big pumpkin; carve a face and make jack-o-lantern.; and roast the seeds. Halloween and thanksgiving are the main holidays in Fall. Football is a favorite game in Fall. People do hiking and bicycling activities in fall season.
One day trees are all bare; leaves have fallen every where; there is an icy chill in the air; very soon winter will be here. Some animals will begin to migrate, or move to warmer areas for the coming winter. Other animals will store and eat food to prepare for hibernation or dormancy. Earth worms tunnel down where the earth doesn't freeze; a raccoon finds a safe place in a hollow log; a chipmunk stores some seeds in undergrounds. We can hear honking of geese when migrating; also can smell burning leaves and smoking woods. We can find scattering dry seeds everywhere we go.
Even though lots of differences between them, there are couple of similarities too, 1) the length of day and night are the same, 2) both season are transition seasons. Spring precedes summer and fall precedes winter. On the day of spring and fall starts (Mar21 & sep22) the sun shines exactly over the equator at that time the day and night time are same almost all places in the world. In both seasons people like to travel. Both seasons are great in many ways. However, I admires the magic of Fall colors.
Good evening.

Here are my suggestions:

"Spring is the season between winter and summer. Autumn, or fall, is the season between summer and winter. Both seasons are beautiful and they are often wet. Although there is exquisite beauty in the seasons of fall and spring, there are also some distinctions between them such as (Remove comma) weather, color, and activities one can partake in during that time. I like both seasons (Remove comma) but I prefer the fall season (Remove comma) because I am from a different continent; Asia. Over there we have the fall season (Remove comma) but it has a different name; there is is called "autumn." The specialty on this continent is the changing of colors; in my place there is no color change.

In spring, the air begins to warm. Temperatures slowly rise as the days get longer. I first came to Chicago during the spring time. Initially I was not impressed much (Remove comma) but in later years I came to love spring weather after suffering the cold days of icy winter. Snow and ice melt and more rain tends to fall during this season. I hear the sound of the last frost crackling under my feet. Spring is showery and flowery. Leaves on trees start budding out and begin greening; flowers and grass start growing and blowing (Remove comma) due to the temperatures getting warmer and warmer. Colored flowers with nice smells announces the spring to everybody; we also smell the first cut of grass on a warm spring day. People do gardening in spring time.
Not only me, but everybody loves to be free and feel light with thin pants and short sleeves in spring. Kids especially love to go out and play. They ride their bikes and if it is a windy day, it is fun to fly kites. Spring is the time for baseball. Most of the children get out their bats and balls. Spring is a busy time for animals; they sleep all winter and become active again during this time. A small green frog, on a big brown log; a black and yellow bee (Remove comma) in a little green tree; all sit and listen to the red bird sing. Many animals will have their young in the spring, when food is plentiful. Furthermore, their young will have time to grow before experiencing a cold winter themselves. Spring is a busy time for people too. Farmers take care of the newborn animals; they plant seeds in the fields. People go swimming and sailing for their pleasure. I can feel the butterflies (Remove comma) swarming around me, landing on me for luck. Who can forget the way lemonade tastes on the first day of spring?
In fall the air begins to cool. So the fall season is cool, with frosty and sleeting weather. Nothing compares to the color of autumn leaves at the peak of their splendor. Leaves of some trees will turn colors such as red, yellow, gold, orange, and brown and they all fall off. I love to see the fall color again and again. My first fall season was unforgettable. My husband took me on a vacation to look at the fall color in Minneapolis. The air was turning crisp and cold, so we put on long pants and sleeves and jackets to keep us warm. It was a wonderful experience to see such nice mixed color trees and leaves. First I thought, "Is a bright yellow and orange sun hiding behind the those trees? Wow! It was marvelous!" Autumn leaves crunched and crackled under my feet and whooshed and whirled all around me. If winds swooped up, more leaves fell down. There was a big big piles of leaves, and I jumped in and hid inside like a child. The leaves were prickled and tickled all over me; after that I popped out. The sun went down so early and we waited to see the big harvest moon; finally the the full moon rose up and up. Even now, I see the fall season in my home whenever I cross the beautiful picture of that memory mounted on the wall. It's ot only me; everyone likes the magic of the fall color. Some plants bear fruit, such as apple trees; ripe apples falls for eating, baking, and caramel apple making. The next interesting thing is the pumpkin; I cannot think about eating pumpkin pie-- it is delicious and yum! People choose a great big pumpkin, carve a face, make a jack-o-lantern, and roast the seeds. Halloween and Thanksgiving are the main holidays in fall. Football is a favorite game in fall. People do hiking and bicycling activities in the fall season.
One day trees are all bare/ eaves have fallen every where/there is an icy chill in the air/very soon winter will be here. Some animals will begin to migrate, or move to warmer areas for the coming winter. Other animals will store and eat food to prepare for hibernation or dormancy. Earth worms tunnel down where the earth does not freeze; a raccoon finds a safe place in a hollow log; a chipmunk stores some seeds underground. We can hear the honking of geese when migrating; we can also can smell burning leaves and smoking woods. We can find scatterings of dry seeds everywhere we go.
Even though there are lots of differences between these two seasons, there are a couple of similarities too. First, the length of day and night are the same. Second, both seasons are transitional seasons. Spring precedes summer and fall precedes winter. On the first day of spring and fall (March 21 and September 22) the sun shines exactly over the equator and at that time the day and night time are the same at almost all the places in the world. In both seasons people like to travel. Both seasons are great in many ways. However, I admire the magic of fall colors."

Good job! Your essay is very descriptive. I too am a fall-lover, so reading your essay made me feel really good. Your word choice has improved in this essay; you chose some very bold and intense words to describe your feelings and memories. Nice work!

Regards,
Gloria
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Aug 1, 2008, 04:41am   #5
Hello Gloria,

Thank you so much. I really appriciate it. I wonder your sincerity and want to keep it myself . These words are not for my work only, you are doing extradinary service to students like me. Really you are doing a great service. God bless you!

Thanks a lot
Newworld.



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