Hey. I just finished my paper but i need some help editing and making my thoughts more clear. I would really appreciate it so please and thank you in advance=)
Heres the question:
Examine the spanish conquest of the new world from 3 different perspectives
1. How would a spaniard of the 16th century view the actions of the conquistadors in the american continent?
2. How would a native american perceive the intrusion of the Spanish?
3. How are the actions of the spanish conquistadors perceived today?
Make sure you incorperate historical evidence that will defend your ideas and strengthen your arguements.
After the discovery of the Americas, the Spanish government sent an influx of Spanish conquistadors or conquerors...
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seema a good essay... Keep on writing
An essay that I enjoyed reading, keep it up!
Hi!
One great essay! I made only a few corrections. They were all small. You do write well, indeed!
Mark
In order to capitalize on the new world' s resources and claim land for the king of Spain, they suppressed the Native Americans.
Therefore, Christianity, the focal point of Spanish, culture was the basis of a civilized society.
In the eyes of the Spanish, the natives were nothing more than animals, who in comparison to the Spanish, were as "apes [were to] men".
So when the natives wanted to fight back against the Spanish invaders, most of their attempts failed, for their simple weaponry was no match for Spanish rifles and crossbows.
Hello,
I had to remove the whole essay because I found a sentence that you copied directly from another website.
I think I see that you tried hard to write most sentences in your own way, but if you copy even one sentence you'll fail and get in trouble for plagiarism! It is hard, but you have to re-word every sentence and say it in your own way.
Hi Kevin,
What clued you in on the fact that the essay was copied from a website, or that a sentence was copied from a website? I'd like to know.
Did it just "look" as if it were copied to you?
--Mark
I usually paste a selection of text into Google and see what comes up. That just helps me to make sure no essays are copied. Sometimes English language learners copy text with the intention to revise it as part of their writing practice, but then they do not paraphrase enough, or they get overwhelmed. But I still have to delete it! :-)
But anyway, google works so well that if I paste one whole sentence into the search box it will find the essay if it already exists...
