hello everyone, could you please write an essay about the above topic.
I don't think this is possible, because the overall objective of this forum, as I understood during my activity here, is to encourage students to write themselves, thereby developing their writing skills.
You should write an essay yourself, if you want to improve your writing.
If u don't mind to jot some essay about this topic. So, i can learn from my mistake
How can you become aware of your mistakes, if you don't write anything? Prepare a draft and place it here. Moderators and members of the forum will provide feedbacks to your essays, indicating your omissions and correcting your mistakes. Be sure that no essay will remain unchecked. Only by this way you will be able to learn from your mistakes. And it realy works!
my most weakness is, i don't read book at all. My laziness!
this may be the dominant reason that affects your writing. you ought to overcome your laziness and read as much as you can. You can do this by reading essays of other forum members as well, since some of them are very good source of information. Do not copy them, though; try to develop your own ideas and style.
Do not afraid of writing! The most difficult part is to begin; the rest will come with persistence!
good luck :)