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Highlighting the fact that crime among the teenagers is high in some countries


Neetukapilsarna 1 / -  
May 3, 2015   #1
In recent time most of the countries are facing the problem of increase in the crime rate among teenagers. this essay will be highlighting the facot
lcturn87 - / 435 236  
May 4, 2015   #2
Hi, I would like to assist you in some way. Did you need help with your thesis statement?

In recent times, most countries are facing the problem of increasing crime rates amongst teenagers. This essay will be highlighting those facts.

I corrected some grammar issues. However, if you need any more assistance after writing it I can help you.
lcturn87 - / 435 236  
May 4, 2015   #3
I just wanted to give you further assistance.

1) Gathering information from a few countries could help you write a good essay.
2) Remember to cite your sources
3) Also, you could think about why crime rate is high. Is it related to poverty, exposure to violent crime, association, etc?
4) Are there any common factors that make crime high in some countries and not in others?

These are some further points I wanted to mention to help assist you with writing.
gondam7 3 / 7  
May 15, 2015   #4
you should talk about the relation between the teenager and his family. this has a great impact on the crime rate and increased violence of the teenager. as the absence of the role model and the urge to be a better person, can lead to frustration and lack of confidence, which will make the teenager want to feel that he has some power or skill. so he will go for the easiest way which is crime and violence


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