Hi all! I am a new user here. I have to write a descriptive essay for my english composition. This essay should be about me. Where ever I am in the room or any other place, I should be writing about my current surroundings. I have to offer the reader my perspective and review my five leads (which I dont understand what that is) and use spatial organization for my description. I haven't started on my essay yet, I am still taking notes about a descriptive essay. What do you think I should start with? Should I start with a pentad? An informal outline? A mapping approach. Because I must include an organization plan, and the five different focusing lines or leads I created as part of my prewriting.
I really appreciate it, if you help me do this. Or if you can give me some ideas on how to start and then after I start writing some paragraphs, maybe you can help me edit them or revise them.
I really thank you all for your help.
Greetings!
Unfortunately, not having been in class with you, I am not sure about some of the terms you are using. In fact, the only one that made sense to me was "informal outline." Surely your instructor gave you definitions for the "five leads" and other terms? Or you have a textbook which describes them? I'm afraid I can't be much help with that part, but I'd be happy to help you edit the paragraphs once you've written them!
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
Thanks a lot. I do have the definitions for the five leads. I understand a little bit about this now. I am going to start with my outline and my rough draft. I will post it once I finish it, I thank you very much for your reply.
Thanks
You're welcome! I'll look forward to reading it!
Sarah
need suggestions for self describing essay for admission to a research institute.
I am a science student. I have to write a descriptive assay about me and my research interests. I can write the later very confidently but I am not sure how to write about myself.
It does not look nice to me when I am writing about my self, if someone can provide me a model essay then it will be very helpful. need suggestions for self describing essay for admission to a research institute.
You can take a look at my essay that I wrote about myself if that will help you?? MY REASON FOR VIEWING LIFE AS AMAZING (I was in five different hospitals) there is the link or you can find it under the unanswered section. The title is WHY LIFE IS AMAZING.
'My physical description' - How do I conclude an essay about myself?
I have an assignment to write a 5 paragraph essay about myself. The first paragraph should have my name, my family, and a bit of background. The second is supposed to be a physical description of myself. The third is my strengths and accomplishments, and the fourth is my weaknesses. Now, the last paragraph is my conclusion, but I just don't know how I'd end it when its basically just my description.
Any ideas?
You could go beyond superficial descriptions about yourself by delving deeper into your hopes, aspirations, and feelings about the world. I make this suggestion because it seems as if that's what the essay is doing. As you move from one paragraph to the next, the topics grow more abstract. Thus, unlike the previous paragraphs, things such as your hopes, aspirations, and feelings about the world would require you to talk about things that do not have a physical or concrete existence. Any of these could make a wonderful conclusion.
