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Fall is the season that causes people to feel low - how to write introduction?


n_tina59 4 / 9  
Aug 28, 2010   #1
Fall is the season that causes people to feel low
Do you agree?

Introduction:
Some people likes fall for beautiful Nature and mild weather in this season but as far as I am concerned most of the people have a different feeling in fall like depression or low energy

please help me to this introduction thanks all
freezard7734 17 / 209  
Aug 29, 2010   #2
Do you agree?

I don't really agree, personally. Too me, it is one of the best seasons. Right between summer and winter, the weather is almost always "just right."

For your thesis, don't state "most feel low..." because many of the readers may find otherwise. Simply just say "while some like fall ... others think that fall makes them feel low... etc"

Do you see what I mean?

For the body paragraphs, think of reasons why fall would make someone feel low and enervated. You could even use scientific facts if you can find them. Experience with others can also help.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Aug 29, 2010   #3
Hi Tina, this intro is pretty good. However, take the "s" off the end of "like."

Some people like ...

I think you just need to come up with ideas. Don't be afraid to make mistakes with your English. Write sentences about your ideas, and we will help make it perfect.

Each paragraph should have 4 or 5 sentences to explain an idea. All the paragraph ideas add up to the main idea of the whole essay. So, the first thing to do is come up with a great idea!

Google this: seasons and emotions
That should give you some good ideas.

:-)


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