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"My bad school experience" - academic paragraph


waf 1 / -  
Mar 18, 2009   #1
can any one help me my teacher told me that write an academic paragraph
on MY "BAD SCHOOL EXPERIENCE"
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newsha31 19 / 75  
Mar 18, 2009   #2
have you ever been caught while cheating?
have you ever broke a window in your school?
have you ever got a detention?
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 19, 2009   #3
Good! Get a clear picture in your mind and write the first sentence you think of. Watch your thoughts, and see what comes into the mind. You know what that bad experience was -- for me, it was so bad I would not even be able to write about it! For your experience, though, think of the emotions involved, the people involved, and then watch your thoughts. Write the first rhythmic and passionate sentence that comes to mind.

This is called an "expository" essay, because you are exposing some truth.

After you write that paragraph, don't make it the first paragraph of the essay. Instead, let it be the second paragraph. Go add an intro later.

Remember to let each para spill out of the topic sentence, so that the whole para is about what the topic sentence is about.

Paragraphs in the middle tell the story, the para at the end reflects on some MEANINGFUL TRUTH, and the para at the beginning grabs the attention and runs with it.

Be brilliant!!
EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Mar 19, 2009   #4
Think of the ways "bad" could be defined. The experience could have been something embarrassing, physically painful, angering, or even just plain boring. The topic wasn't to write about your worst school experience, after all, so anything unpleasant that you can make interesting will do. It doesn't even have to be something bad that happened to you. It might have been something you witnessed happening to someone else that hurt you. Good luck coming up with a topic.
newsha31 19 / 75  
Apr 2, 2009   #5
tell us what did u write about. im curious.
peppersauce 1 / 4  
Apr 2, 2009   #6
if i had that assignment i would write about something that i thought was unfair.. like perhaps someone did something and you took the blame for it.
1s2a3s 2 / 4  
Apr 5, 2009   #7
This is a real good oppertunity for you to enage the reader...if it can be fictional then maybe you want to talk about something like...a punishment where you are left in the teachers office alone...and you begin to get a little too nosey...

And then it can just spiral waaaaay out of control...those are always fun to read!

Good luck


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