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<title>FIT fashion merchandising admission essay</title>
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<description>hi! im trying to get accepted into the fashion institute of technology for fall 2010 and i hope that someone can proofread this for me, and tell me your opinions thanks. and the topic is What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT? Why are you interested in the major you are applying to?    &quot; Beneath the makeup and behind the smile, I am just a girl who wishes for the world.&quot; - Marilyn Monroe. A quote from one of the world&#039;s most remarkable woman inspired me as a child to look at t...</description>
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<title>KING LEAR and Joyce Carol Oates&#039;s &quot;Is This the Promised End?&quot;</title>
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<description>I am taking an ILC English course and I am trying to do key question 14 of KING LEAR. I need some help. The question is based on the abridged version of Joyce Carol Oates&#039;s &quot;Is This the Promised End?&quot;. For this question, I have to state the thesis of the essay, which I have preprared. Can you please go through it and give some suggestions for improvement?  Essay Thesis: Although the human soul is in a constant search of redemption and achievement of some sort of spiritual awakenin...</description>
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<title>TOEFL: &quot;Studying alone or in a group&quot;</title>
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<description>Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.  When I found the chance of studying in a group with my classmates, I wished I can go back in time and took all my exams again. I personally prefer studying in a group due to these noticeable features, getting help from other students, improving my attitude for learning, managing my time in an effective way.             When pupils m...</description>
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<title>&quot;Why are you considering The Ohio State University?&quot; HELP!</title>
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<description>I want to write this essay but i dont want to sound to stupid. tell me what is unnecessary or what doesnt make sense please. (it wont hurt my feelings)  I&#039;am considering The Ohio State University not only for it&#039;s prestige but for the educational opportunities. It starts from the top the President, Elwood  Gordon Gee,  is one nationally recognized as one of the best. Its good to have a humble leader that cares about the school and keeps it on track. There are many majors and programs t...</description>
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<title>Someone who has made an impact on you? need help with structure and grammar</title>
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<description>I&#039;m really bad with punctuation and I also need tips to on improving my essay.         Every morning in 8th grade, while my mom drove me to school, I would plug in my iPod and close my eyes. I wasn&#039;t just listening to the songs. I was imagining myself  performing the songs. I wanted that feeling of accomplishment and admiration from the crowd. I would arrive at school reminding myself that this dream of mine isn&#039;t going to happen. David was going to prove me wrong.  David has been...</description>
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<title>Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay</title>
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<description>Would someone please tell me if I&#039;m even on the right track or if my content is too risky? Thanks!  Topic: Stanford students are known to possess a sense of intellectual vitality. Tell us about an idea or an experience you have had that you found intellectually engaging. (1800 characters)   Killer Clown. Jeffrey Dahmer. Cold murderers or men pushed to the brink by society?   John Wayne Gacy Jr., also known as &quot;Killer Clown&quot;, murdered at least thirty-three young males, some of whom...</description>
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<title>Should gay people be allowed to adopt children</title>
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<description>hello everybody,    I need help writing a paper about should gay people be allowed to adopt.What are some disadvantages about gay people being allow to adopt?</description>
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<title>To my future roommate - Stanford Prompt</title>
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<description>Prompt: Virtually all of Stanford&#039;s undergraduates live on campus.  What would you want your future roommate to know about you?   To my future roommate:	  Are you claustrophobic? I am not, but if you are, don&#039;t worry! I am perfectly fine with small spaces, so you&#039;ll have plenty of room. I would even call myself a claustrophilic—lover of small areas (but I love the outdoors and the unknown as well; I don&#039;t fear big areas).  I fit in tiny places. Being shoved into lockers was a...</description>
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<title>&quot;Tutoring as an extracurricular activity&quot;-UNIV OF ILLINOIS</title>
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<description>Essay 2: In an essay of 300 words or less, choose one extracurricular activity, work experience, or community service project from the list you provided on the application and explain why you initially chose it, why you continued with it, and how you benefited from it.  Tutoring started with a request and nurtured into an interest. Being one of the first to successfully complete my math assignment, my lecturer asked me to elucidate the procedure to the reminder of the class. Though I was initial...</description>
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<description>Some people think children&#039;s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.    Nowadays, following technology development, the way of entertainment become variety increasingly, such as TV, radio or PC games and so on. Indeed, it provide people a great deal of pleasure, but it does not mean that it is a good sign for those people who cannot control their behavior, especially for children.  In my opinion, allowing c...</description>
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<title>SOP-----Msc-OIL and gas engineering</title>
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<description>I am so happy to join the forum. My statement of purpose is attached below. please kindly let me know all types of comments.(especially grammatical mistakes) Thank you!  Each and every country in this world needs energy, to live, to survive, and to show their supremacy. Energy in the form crude oil running the world for past 100 years. Imagine a life without oil, there would be no flights flying, no car moving, to be hyperbolic the earth will literarily stop rotating. The oil industry made human...</description>
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<title>food has become easier to prepare.this change has improved the life</title>
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<description>i am preparing for ielts, and i really worry about my writing. please check for my grammar, structures and logic. i am happy to see your comments thanks so much  Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?  Humankind has undergone many changes in the eating habit from the period when he hunted for himself to era when he has become dependent on processed food. Obviously, it has become easier to prepare nowadays. However, whether or not this change ha...</description>
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<title>What are the differences of these MFA admission requirements?</title>
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<description>Hi, I&#039;m applying for MFA. And it may be kind of ridiculous questions for someone. But I just cannot exactly define what their requirements are.   Admission Requirements  Online Graduate Application: Include your 1) research interest, 2) summary of prior experience, 3) professional/career goals, 4) statement of intent, 5) personal statement, 6) three letters of recommendation as well as answers to the following questions:       a) Characterize your undergraduate educational experiences. How ...</description>
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<title>UC Prompt number 2: My greatest accomplishment</title>
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<description>Hello, Please make any necessary grammatical/spelling corrections, word or phrase changes, or any feedback at all, no matter how blunt it may sound it will be appreciated. Thanks.  Prompt. Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?     My greatest accomplishment thus far has been conquering the obstacles that I encountered bet...</description>
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<title>Need help in reviewing my SOP for Computational Engineering</title>
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<description>Hello everybody...  I have been trying to put together some ideas for my SOP...and I have gotta say it was not easy... whenever I tried to put the ideas into words, it just didn&#039;t work...I tried to check other SOPs on the web to find anything that might be suitable to express my case...well..at the end this is what I ended up with...I would appreciate reviewing and critics....Many thanks in advance.  P.S.:for privacy reasons, I have deleted some of the info within --------------------------...</description>
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<title>UC Prompt 1: K-pop</title>
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<description>Prompt: Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.  I&#039;m not sure if my response to this prompt is what UC will accept =/ Some people have said things like &quot;this is fine because that&#039;s your world right now and has been for a while&quot; - and others say that &quot;they want family or community background, things you grew up with&quot;. I figured the prompt was worded broadly e...</description>
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<title>&quot;Watching Television is bad for children&quot; agree or disagree? Please check it</title>
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<description>&quot;Watching Television is bad for children&quot; agree or disagree? Please check it  Television plays very important role in our lives, and it is also main source of entertainment. We watch TV whenever we are free, or sometimes while working, and learn many things from it. As the TV is used in our daily life, it broadcasts many live events and news which educate us in many ways. But, sometimes children watch those programmes on TV which  should not meant to be viewed by child&#039;s age group...</description>
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<title>Frankenstein vs. All Quiet on the Western Front</title>
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<description>I have to talk about the theme of responsibility in each book. I just need proof-reading. It&#039;s definitely not finished. I have at least another page just discussing All Quiet. Thank you.   Frankenstein and All Quiet on the Western Front are books based on responsibility; what happens when someone selfish is given complete power? How do they handle the responsibility? In Frankenstein, the person in power who does not act responsibly is Victor Frankenstein. In All Quiet on the Western Front, ...</description>
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<title>Unfair Bias Essay for University of Texas at Austin</title>
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<description>I am applying to University of Texas at Austin School of Architecture and this is my first essay. The prompt is below. the next couple of paragraphs.  I really appreciate and would LOVE suggestions and EDITS on my paper. I can not decide if my issue is too weak but I did not want to choose and issue that was overdone i.e. abortion, death penalty, etc.  Thanks again for all of your help  Topic B: REQUIRED Choose an issue of importance to you—the issue could be personal, school related, local, pol...</description>
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<title>COUNTRY BOYS - REACTION PAPER please edit this essay non native english speaker</title>
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<description>&quot;Country boys&quot; is the new type of documentary movie that I have ever watched because it is not base on topic that is mostly issued now a day such as global warming or why people die because of flue. The movie reminds us the high school life that we had just few month ago. I realized there were many things that happened when I was in high school while watching this movie again. The movie is base on the boys who were 15 years old becoming a grown man by solving problems that they have. T...</description>
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<title>Martial Arts &amp; Me -UC Promt 2</title>
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<description>&quot;Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?&quot;  	&quot;GO!&quot; I lock my leg head-level and yell at the top of my lungs. Sweat pours down my face and catches on the lapel of my uniform. I&#039;ve never been so exhausted in my life. Four years of my life dedicated to this three hour test. All in the hopes of joining ...</description>
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<title>Johns Hopkins Supplement Essay - Limit is only my imagination</title>
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<description>1. Write a brief essay in which you respond to the following question. (freshman applicants only): Johns Hopkins offers 50 majors across the schools of Arts and Sciences and Engineering. On this supplement, we ask you to identify one or two that you might like to pursue here. Why did you choose the way you did? If you are undecided, why didn&#039;t you choose? (If any past courses or academic experiences influenced your decision, you may include them in your essay.)     Why do I want to study sc...</description>
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<title>(Prompt #1) Wisconsin-Madison Personal Statement</title>
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<description>Hello to everyone. Please comment on my essay. I hope I can get the advices from you all so that I can fix my problems and produce a better essay. Thank you!!  Prompt #1 The University of Wisconsin values an educational environment that provides all members of the campus community with opportunities to grow and develop intellectually, personally, culturally, and socially. In order to give us a more complete picture of you as an individual, please tell us about the particular life experiences, pe...</description>
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<title>&quot;Coming to America&quot; (How has your family influenced who you are)</title>
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<description>How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are?  	My family&#039;s history greatly contributes to the person I am today. The struggles my family have gone through has taught me to appreciate everything I have and the vast amount of opportunities presented to me. My family roots trace back to the 3rd world country of Haiti, where I was born. I was born into a poor family in the city of Port-au-Prince. Though we were poor my grandmother, always wanted better for us. My...</description>
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<title>Why Northwestern (opportunities and Nobel prize-winning professors)</title>
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<description>Why Northwestern?  This is only the first three paragraphs of my essay. It&#039;s a very rough draft, I&#039;m kind of stuck! Any help would be greatly appreciated.   Students from around the United States, as well as the world, flock to Northwestern, looking to make new friends, learn new things, and most importantly, to get a great education. This wide-variety of students creates Northwestern&#039;s diverse learning environment which helps all students to grow both intellectually and socially....</description>
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<title>Being morally, physically, and intellectually strong, &quot;Vires, Artes, Mores&quot;</title>
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<description>I&#039;ve been working on this essay for a while now trying to reword it and reword it to make it flow right. I was wondering if anyone has any suggestions on how I can change it to make it more original and not just sounding like every other college applicant that personifies these words. Thank you in advance.   Prompt: For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, &quot;Vires, Artes, Mores&quot; have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all ...</description>
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<title>Literary Analysis on The Haunting of Hill House</title>
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<description>*Can someone please just check my grammar?* Section One 	After reading one of Shirley Jackson&#039;s most famous novels, The Haunting of Hill House, I was taken aback by her influential use of the paranormal and how she explored each and every attribute of the story with her unique way of writing and her distinctive morphing of the mind. Though, once accustomed to her style of writing, I became very intrigued with the book and the many themes she utilized throughout the novel. 	Within Jacks...</description>
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<title>Toefl essay&quot;Learning about the past has no values for those of us living in the</title>
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<description>Hi please give your feed back . I am preparing for toefl and would like to have suggestion for writing section. Thanks.  Learning about the past has no values for those of us living in the present. Agree or disagree.  Can knowledge about the past for those of us living in present would be beneficial? Some people thinks that this information is useless because the past is passed present. While others believe that it is advantageous for our present as well as future. I agree with the later opinion...</description>
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<title>Mathematics is my passion - Saint Louis University Scholarship Essay</title>
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<description>Please any feedback would be much appreciated. Not very concern about grammer at this point, just comment on the context.  &quot;The scholarship essay must be a written response of no more than approximately 500 words to the Presidential Scholarship essay question listed below:   Nearly all of our Presidential Scholarship applicants demonstrate significant involvement in extracurricular activities and have achieved recognition on a variety of levels. Bearing that in mind, please discuss what def...</description>
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<title>UC Prompt #1 - My World</title>
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<description>What do you think of this essay? Is the alliteration overwhelming? Does it distract from my main points? Does all the A alliteration appear arrogant?    Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations:   I&#039;ve always aspired to awesome altitudes, and the agents actualizing all these ambitions are the area I abide in and all the animals I abide amongst. I aim to actualize an adept analysis of ...</description>
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<title>Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/essay-writing-feedback-3/multi-language-clash-synthesis-essay-10625/</link>
<description>Having trouble writing this synthesis essay which I am supposed to analyze 2 essays and switch from each essay in each paragraph. Please give me as much feedback , Is my thesis clear enough? Does my topic sentences relate to my thesis?    Multi-Language Clash Richard Rodriguez &amp; Amy Tan   		Richard Rodriguez and Amy Tan talk about their experiences with non-American backgrounds living in America. Both essays &quot;Aria: Memoir of a bilingual Childhood&quot; by Rodriguez, and &quot;Mother Ton...</description>
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<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 13:37:15 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>Ask for Thank giving day Holiday</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/general-writing-questions-13/ask-thank-giving-day-holiday-10624/</link>
<description>Good morning   As we discussed in our daily meeting about Thank giving day holiday. SME and i trained all the topic to our team mebers more than 2 times.  More over now we are in on the job training. Being holiday for Thank giving, we are not getting any inputs for processing.   However we will cover all training stuff which is scheduled on that day will be done 22nd novemeber itself.  Herewith i attached the revised training plan and requesting you to kindly approve the holiday for Thanks givin...</description>
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<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 07:57:57 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>Which ideas are better for &quot;Turning Point&quot; Essay to win exchange program?</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/essay-writing-feedback-3/ideas-better-turning-point-essay-win-exchange-program-10622/</link>
<description>This is only first draft, without grammar correction, I know it has a lot of mistakes. I mean how&#039;s about ideas and impression in two drafts. I want to know which one is better or more suitable for topic &quot;Turning point in life&quot; So, I can put my effort on only one. This is for Stanford exchange program. Please help me it&#039;s really important for me...  Also, how to write it smooth and beautiful. I&#039;m not the english native, Please advice! Any ideas are very appreciated  1. H...</description>
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<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 05:27:24 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>Common app. ethical dilemma: alcoholism</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-essays-2/common-app-ethical-dilemma-alcoholism-10620/</link>
<description>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.  Prior to Grade 11, whenever I heard the words &#039;substance abuse&#039; my mind immediately pictured useless, pathetic and stupid people who were ruining their lives for no reason. My notion began to change slightly as I moved through my last schooling years but even with an ever-increasing academic workload I would never even consider any substance as a stress relieve...</description>
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<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 01:37:16 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>UW Describe an experience of Culture difference positive and negative you have</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-essays-2/uw-describe-experience-culture-difference-positive-negative-10618/</link>
<description>Family is a universal name all over the world. Even though, different cultures can influence on the traditions of the family, it is the only place on earth full of love. I have a deeper understanding on the relationship between family members since I came to America and lived with two host families as an exchange student. The difference between Chinese and American families is significant and profound which also reflects the distinctive culture and value difference.  American family I observed i...</description>
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<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 00:26:04 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>An essay about Pole Vaut-Rutger&#039;s essay</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-essays-2/essay-pole-vaut-rutgers-essay-10617/</link>
<description>Prompt=Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences.   ME Hi,I wrote this essay for English a while a go and wondered if it was an OK essay for the prompt above?   Essay: With my eyes shut, hurtling myself through the air, was one of the best experiences of...</description>
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<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 23:59:13 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>Helping Someone Dear to Me- UC prompt 2</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-essays-2/helping-someone-dear-uc-prompt-10616/</link>
<description>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, Contribution, or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?  	It is 5 a.m. and I am sound asleep. That is, until I hear a loud grunting sound similar to that of a cowering bulldog. I ignore it at first , assuming it was the neighbor&#039;s annoying dog, and pull the covers over my head and try to get some more sleep in before school starts. T...</description>
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<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 23:40:42 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>Choosing college similiar to choosing girlfriend??</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-essays-2/choosing-college-similiar-choosing-girlfriend-10615/</link>
<description>Looking for any ideas to add or critiques. I&#039;m trying to answer why I choose UCF and what to I have to offer UCF/community.  Thanks Guys!   Choosing which college to attend is like finding the right girlfriend.  I do not really know if it was a good decision until a few months down the road.   While I loved my time at DeVry, the one on one attention, small class sizes, and small campus; It is time to move on.  Now I would like to take advantage of the unique opportunities at UCF.  Transferr...</description>
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<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 23:06:41 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/essay-writing-feedback-3/toefl-living-places-different-weather-condition-vs-same-10614/</link>
<description>Could you please critic my writing? Thanks!  Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.  Although some people prefer to live in places that have the same climate all year long, other people like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year.  In my opinion, both scenarios have a...</description>
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<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 22:57:58 -0600</pubDate>
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<title>Synopsis on solar energy applications</title>
<link>http://www.essayforum.com/dissertations-phd-theses-6/synopsis-solar-energy-applications-10613/</link>
<description>Hello, i am about to start my dissertation writing, and one of the first things is to write a synopsis on the topic...........pls i need tips on how to proceed..  cheers  jig</description>
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<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 22:47:26 -0600</pubDate>
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