Why do you think people attend college or university?

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Nowadays, a lot of people without a master degree experience they are behind the job offers when looking for a job and see they have to struggle among master degrees colleges who are applying for the same , especially in now days, difficulty competing for jobs among others during this national recession.

Finally, some people go to college look for a career change. They see they can explore other areas that can give them more satisfaction and better accommodate better to their aspirations.

Among the reasons for people to attend college or university are the following: looking for better opportunities in life, to master his knowledge, and for career change.

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Do not use very long sentences as in para 3. Its makes the reader confused about the actual reason/topic. Therefore break the sentences and make use of Comma, transition and connecting words. This will help to express better your point of view.

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People attend college for several reasons. Primarily, students go into undergraduate courses for career preparation, to be competitive when looking for a job. Others go to college as graduate students, to enhance his knowledge in certain area; and some people go to college just taking advantage of the opportunity in a career change.

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Some students go into undergraduate courses for career preparation or to be competitive when looking for a job. Others go to college as graduate students, to enhance their knowledge in certain area, or to and some people go to college just taking take advantage of an opportunity for [font#FF0000][/font]a career change.

So much better!!

Thanks very much Kevin!

I corrected again. Could you please give me your thougts one more time?

People attend college for several reasons. Primarily, students go into undergraduate courses for career preparation or to be competitive when looking for a job. Others go to college as graduate students, to enhance their knowledge in certain area and the third reason is just for taking advantage of the opportunity in a career change.

In the vast majority, people go to college as undergraduate students looking farther on their life. It is well known how a career can step a person up enhancing his/her opportunities in a job search. A college can be a trampoline for students to get in a job in their career area, even if the student has not finished. Universities often give work opportunities and participate in an internship and other kinds of programs that help students get practice and go smoothly into the job field.

As graduates, people looking to be more competitive go to college to augment their knowledge, getting specialized in a field. Nowadays, after a lack of job in a national recession, it is an advantage to have a master degree. People without it are behind the job offers, struggling when competing with people who have earned their masters.

Finally, some people go to college looking for a career change. They see that they can explore other areas that can give them more satisfaction and accommodate better to their life. A lot of people realized at some point of their life they are working in an area they do not like anymore or they found a new field they will like to explore.

We can conclude that among the reasons for people to attend college or university are the following: looking for better job opportunities, enhancing knowledge and changing career. At the end, all of the reasons have as a common factor, the fact of getting better opportunities in life.

...of the opportunity for a career change.

...college as undergraduate students looking to improve the future of their lives. It is well known how a career can step a person up enhancing his/her opportunities in a job search.

...to augment their knowledge and get specialized training in a field. Nowadays, due to a lack of jobs in a national recession, it is an advantage to have a master degree.

Great! Add this sentence to the end of the first paragraph:
All these reasons for going to college share a common theme: improving one's future life.

Many thanks Kevin! I appreciate your help!