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"The UK has experienced many different changes and invasions throughout its history. From Celts, Romans, Germanic and Norman threats, and for the fertile land and minerals results the final form of what is now known as Great Britain This is not coherent; I am unsure as to what you mean to say here. Please clarify. Their invaders' influence in language, customs, and cultural achievements brought about a completely new civilization.
Britain, how it was known then, was first inhabitated by the Celts. They were a group of Indo-European tribes; half nomadic, half settled people that worked the land, manufactured wool and leather, and accomplished the domestication of animals. At this stage, their language was Gaelic with no written form, but pictographic or runic communication was utilized.Their society was divided into three classes: the warrior aristocracy, the intellectual class, and everyone else. Their religion was polytheistic at this time; druids were priests who performed functions as teaching, judging, and ritual sacrifices. The Celt society was hierarchical and the king was the supreme authority. Furthermore, their society was organize d around warfare due to the fact that the island was desirable for invaders both for its agriculture and minerals.
The first invasion was by the Romans. Julius Caesar, the emperor, and his legions invaded Britain in 55 BC. However, they not completely subdued all the Celtic tribes. As a result, they had to maintain constant military control over the unconquerers What is an "unconqueror"? Someone who does not conquer? Again, I am confused; please clarify. While the Romans were in Britain, they made contributions in language, agriculture, industry, and urbanization as well as in architecture, such as the construction of the palace of Fishbourne. Similarly, the Roman bath was introduced to Britain. Finally, they withdrew from Britain in 410 AD due to weather conditions, but another menace came to the remaining Celts.
The Anglos,the Saxons, and the Jutes were Germanic tribes known for their savage sacirfices. The arrival of these tribes into Britain resulted in total butchery."
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