Yeah, once you have the essay down to about a third of its original length, you should have a reasonable draft to repost. Be careful, too, as you revise, to make sure that your arguments are on-topic. For instance, you say
dgoldsby: If the jury sees or reads the news paper they are not focusing on what evidence that is being presented at that particular time. The jury will think more about what they have heard from the news media. When the jury renders their verdict it is not a fair one. They have formed their opinion about the defendant due to what they have heard from the news media.
These are all very good reasons why the jury should be sequestered from the media during the trial, and possibly for limiting media coverage of a crime before the trial occurs. None of it has any bearing whatsoever on whether the trial itself should be televised, however.
Sean, EssayForum.com
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