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In some countries at the age of 18 young people are allowed to drive, vote and mar In some nations, it is common that, young people at around 18 years are allowed to vote, drive and even...	4	renga78 Jun 2, 10, 05:10am	phuocqui Jun 3, 10, 11:59pm
If there has been some obstacle or bump in the road: Imperfection is beauty Imperfections, or bumps in the road are mere fragments that are there for a reason. (I crossed out part...	3	aubrey Jun 1, 10, 06:10pm	EF_Kevin Jun 3, 10, 06:42am
I analyzed the lyric "Temptation Waits" by Garbage Thank you very much!~ :)	2	ghgyfkd1 May 31, 10, 10:24pm	ghgyfkd1 Jun 3, 10, 02:11am
Quammen vs. Scully: my Essay that compares and analyses two texts Hi there, We are lucky to have such an outstanding writer participating in our forum. I see that...	1	misspellar Jun 1, 10, 03:23am	EF_Kevin Jun 2, 10, 03:11pm
Compare and Contrast Essay- sibling/no sibling Christian, how weirdly self-effacing it is to combine consonant sounds from your first and last name to produce "Crud"... I...	2	haeddleman May 31, 10, 09:15pm	EF_Kevin Jun 1, 10, 07:28pm
"I had a blood disorder" - help with Descriptive Personal Essay Yep, it was interesting to watch you make progress with this one. I hope you stick around and keep...	14	haeddleman May 18, 10, 10:32am	EF_Kevin Jun 1, 10, 06:46pm
Nowadays young children are using mobile phones Here is a quick lesson about has and had: It has become a custom that every children need to have...	4	renga78 May 31, 10, 09:07am	EF_Kevin Jun 1, 10, 06:15pm
Agree or disagree that progress is always good? Thanks a lot Kevin and for homework as well. Your feedback was very encouraging. Will keep writing ...	3	Umeda May 28, 10, 05:48am	Umeda Jun 1, 10, 07:23am
TOEFL: If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would yo kevinhsin1124 kevinhsin1124: If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific...	6	kevinhsin1124 May 27, 10, 10:11am	hatung94 Jun 1, 10, 02:24am
1Discussion --Is it jusified that sports professionals earn more money Summary: Sentence 1: (background) In present agestimes, the phenomenon of enormous income gaps among all walks of life such...	6	cathyliu May 27, 10, 05:14am	cathyliu Jun 1, 10, 12:15am
Healthy life style Thank you, I try to improve my essay	3	JuliaS May 27, 10, 11:43am	JuliaS May 31, 10, 11:43am
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and playing hi~~ Many people think that it would be best for the children to go to school at the young...	4	renga78 May 29, 10, 11:10pm	kevinhsin1124 May 30, 10, 10:50pm
IELTS ESSAY : PREPARED FOOD This is great, thanks for making this an excellent thread. I'll add some ideas: Nowadays, more and more people...	3	sheldon May 27, 10, 01:11pm	EF_Kevin May 30, 10, 02:47pm
Why We Crave Horror Movies It is great that you do not include lots of unhelpful words and phrases, like some writers do. Yet,...	2	reeseinskool May 27, 10, 12:12pm	EF_Kevin May 30, 10, 02:42pm
CAPE poetry essay, experiences of trauma in the Caribbean Thanks, i appreciate it. I did not even realise that i had made so many mistakes. Also, i am aware...	2	hustlerprince May 27, 10, 05:55pm	hustlerprince May 30, 10, 12:52pm
Ielts essay: University students should be required to attend classes the teachers can find out what the students still do not understand or misunderstand and then explain ...... there...	4	phuocqui May 24, 10, 04:20am	sheldon May 29, 10, 11:52pm
Education: Essay regarding "Issue of personal importance to you" ah . thanks alot ! will do the neccessary changes ! thanks again	3	hellstrider May 27, 10, 04:00am	hellstrider May 29, 10, 12:49am
Online Education Myths, peer review assignment He teacher mad me do the same essay, and told me to get someone to answer the same question about...	4	HigherEducation May 25, 10, 09:04pm	HigherEducation May 28, 10, 06:34pm
TOEFL: Improve Roads or Public Transports I'm so glad Azeri is here helping people. Thanks!! Many people think that governments should spend money on...	2	hatung94 May 26, 10, 09:41pm	EF_Kevin May 27, 10, 02:12pm
GRE AW Issue 69. "Government should place few, if any, restrictions... Ha ha, you should open your mind to the different forms good writing can take. As you can see...	10	jade Mar 30, 10, 01:27pm	EF_Kevin May 27, 10, 02:01pm
PEOPLE SHOULD CHANGE THEIR JOBS ATLEAST ONCE - FEEDBACK If we are to compare the job flexibility of today's generation and those of 20 years ago, we can see...	1	prince303 May 27, 10, 07:36am	EF_Susan May 27, 10, 01:42pm
SAT Essay: Are our decisions always limited by the rules of society? Thanks for all the comments! 'Chimerical' is a word I picked up from the SAT word list. It comes...	4	puroodsy May 25, 10, 04:12am	puroodsy May 27, 10, 12:17pm
ESSAY - READING ENTERTAINMENT BOOKS INSTEAD OF EDUCATIONAL BOOKS - FEEDBACK thanks everyone.. :)	4	prince303 May 25, 10, 04:38am	prince303 May 27, 10, 12:21am
Eating at restaurants or at home? TOEFL essay. shalini singh: Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food...	5	vijaya May 4, 10, 10:00pm	hatung94 May 26, 10, 09:33pm
Classification essay- Modern students's learning style For a long time, studying have has been a significant issue among human beings. That is the only method...	4	HUTAllen May 26, 10, 12:49am	EF_Kevin May 26, 10, 08:15pm
Art history paper about looted artwork during WWII Even before the 1930's, he had plans to turn his home town of Linz into a museum city, stocked with...	1	queensuri May 25, 10, 07:51pm	EF_Susan May 26, 10, 07:47pm
Computer based Instructions ! Good or bad. Yes, good corrections here. You have some options: Computers represent one of the... or The computer is one...	3	shalini singh May 25, 10, 12:36pm	EF_Kevin May 26, 10, 12:38pm
IELTS TASK 2 : Study abroad (advantages and disadvantages) Yep, keep practicing. It'll be perfect soon! Read aloud to activate all the various areas of your brain when you...	6	NguyenXuanKien May 23, 10, 07:01am	EF_Kevin May 26, 10, 11:28am
IELTS ESSAY : FINANCIAL AID TO DEVELOPING COUNTRIES thanks for your generous help!!	3	sheldon May 24, 10, 12:10am	sheldon May 26, 10, 01:44am
TOEFL: THE INTERNET - problems or information? I think like these: To begin with/The first factor(/belief/reason/catalyst...) is that/I believe/.../(TRY NOTHING in replacement, just leave a gap between...	8	djanat May 4, 10, 06:22pm	triplesmickey May 25, 10, 02:08am
Should crimes committed many years ago be forgotten? - Essay writing advice lentan: Perhaps what is necessary and appropriate is for people to disengage themselves from any predispositions they may have about...	6	lentan May 20, 10, 07:15am	EF_Kevin May 24, 10, 06:17pm
ielts essay: Advantages of attending school from a young age thanx everybody	4	gingerpopo May 17, 10, 12:17am	gingerpopo May 24, 10, 09:10am
Memories of a teacher from elementary school. Parents and teacher play important role in a life of a person. Boring sentence! start with an interesting one....	6	shalini singh May 22, 10, 12:35pm	EF_Kevin May 23, 10, 09:25pm
Many people are moving in to the big cities. Mickey, you seem seriously interested in helping people. Everyone participating in this thread made such a unique contribution; I'm going...	10	prince303 May 20, 10, 12:01am	EF_Kevin May 23, 10, 11:59am
Art Self-Evaluation piece: the process of creating your art portfolio I have had to take a long look at the last four years in LaGuardia & my art through the...	2	Jd87rh May 21, 10, 06:41pm	EF_Kevin May 22, 10, 11:22pm
type1:controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people Before you say the situation has been aggravated, you should establish clearly that it is an undesirable situation. For example:...	3	cathyliu Apr 28, 10, 04:05am	EF_Kevin May 22, 10, 04:59pm
It is easy to welcome innovation and accept new ideas Gary1986: It is easy to welcome innovation and accept new ideas, what most people find difficult, however, is accepting the...	2	Gary1986 May 21, 10, 03:15am	EF_Kevin May 22, 10, 04:55pm
Music and art in school In conclusion, undoubtedly, this is the era of computers and science. Therefore, schools must be flexible enough to...	5	prince303 May 18, 10, 01:21am	EF_Kevin May 21, 10, 11:10am
ESSAY- Comment on freedom on choice of clothing in schools - FEEDBACK No comma necessary here: School is the place which lays foundation ... progress or their overall personalities....	3	prince303 May 20, 10, 03:11am	EF_Kevin May 21, 10, 11:08am
Peace Corps Admissions Essay, reasons for wanting to serve Thanks for the response! I will definitely implement those changes.	2	bsquared May 19, 10, 03:30am	bsquared May 20, 10, 10:49pm
Marine Pollution Introductory paragraph Source of survival is a strange phrase. It might be better to write: Water is the most crucial...	1	eveehp May 19, 10, 08:39am	EF_Kevin May 20, 10, 01:28pm
My hero, Terry Fox born in Canada talaan: It'll be easier for every one to make some comments if you state the purpose Yes, that is...	2	thailand May 18, 10, 11:26pm	EF_Kevin May 20, 10, 12:43pm
Parents should encourage their high school students for part time jobs ! Working twenty years at an inconsequential job may not give as much satisfaction as a highly prolific and demanding job...	3	shalini singh May 18, 10, 09:38pm	EF_Kevin May 20, 10, 12:43pm
SAT: to question the ideas and decisions of those in positions of authority Thank you for your advice :)	4	puroodsy May 18, 10, 09:11am	puroodsy May 20, 10, 08:35am
"True beauty" is the good humanity I think your grasp of English is really good actually, but it just takes practice Tips on writing: For...	5	yangzom May 14, 10, 07:07pm	meisj0n May 20, 10, 01:15am
Ielts essays: How do movies and television influence people's behavior. try to avoid writing firstly, secondly.. instead use sentences like one of the significant reasons.. over all good ideas, try...	4	phuocqui May 17, 10, 04:19am	prince303 May 19, 10, 11:48pm
Course about which i had expectation which may not have been met steel steal It is quoted by A famous quotation of Theodore Roosevelt reads, "Those who have......	2	shalini singh May 17, 10, 05:09pm	EF_Kevin May 19, 10, 04:14pm
"Failure is necessary for education to take place?" - grade my essay thank you very much.	4	Mizo Metallic May 13, 10, 02:33pm	Mizo Metallic May 19, 10, 02:20pm
IELTS.. About the Music and why it's important to many people? thanx alot bro for your notes,but unfortunately most of them are typos. i just want you to give me...	3	Pink1 May 16, 10, 10:30am	Pink1 May 17, 10, 04:07pm
Theatre Under The Stars The popular musicals titled Shrek the Musical, and West Side Story, will be joining another popular musical that has been...	1	shane123 May 17, 10, 02:59am	EF_Susan May 17, 10, 03:47pm
Is happiness something over which people have no control? (SAT) SA51: Happiness is something like the key to treasure. It can be readily stated that without happiness, one can never...	4	SA51 Apr 28, 10, 10:37am	triplesmickey May 17, 10, 05:33am
"Fifty-Four Forty or Fight" History Research Essay Capitalize "River" because it is part of a proper noun. Columbia River I see a little typo:...	1	icemaster2340 May 15, 10, 07:41pm	EF_Kevin May 16, 10, 01:22pm
Term Paper: Sailor Mentality Don't use a semi-colon here: ...when he writes: "With a philosophical flourish... or ...when he writes, "With a philosophical flourish......	3	wilcerf Jan 24, 10, 08:39pm	EF_Kevin May 16, 10, 01:05pm
IELTS exam >Schools nowadays have severe problems with student behavior> Hi! Here is a little feedback I'll add to the great advice that has been given.... It is quite...	4	Pink1 May 14, 10, 06:51pm	EF_Kevin May 16, 10, 11:53am
By questioning accepted wisdom can we advance our understanding of the world Thanks Susan It is really helpful.	2	tyro May 14, 10, 03:25pm	tyro May 15, 10, 01:00pm
About Malaysia's problems Every country has it own problem, for example, Iraq/Iran is...two separate countries facing a terrible war, Africa is...	1	celineccky May 14, 10, 10:41am	EF_Susan May 15, 10, 12:10pm
School teach for career or general knowledge (IELTS test) There are two points of view on whether schools should educate students towards particular jobs or general studiess. In...	1	viebboy May 14, 10, 09:34am	EF_Susan May 15, 10, 11:49am
Text messaging: write about an invention that has changed your life The invention that made the biggest change in my life was text messaging. This discovery changed my way of ......	2	LordBartosz May 14, 10, 03:37am	EF_Kevin May 15, 10, 10:46am
The Life of Pi Essay They are able to create an environment where symbols are prevalent, including that of authority, death, and colour.--- including what...	4	Essay Guy May 13, 10, 11:16am	EF_Kevin May 15, 10, 10:06am
CBEST Writing: My favorite subject/course in school (Korean Literature) Don't capitalize high: When I was in high school, my favorite... Thanks, Shalini, for the work you did here!...	3	imhe May 13, 10, 01:20pm	EF_Kevin May 15, 10, 10:00am

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