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Airline deregulation : pls read and check my grammar if possible The airline industry currently occupies a very important place in the Irish market, due to both the major changes that...	2	Tizzy Jan 6, 09, 06:18pm	EF_Kevin Jan 7, 09, 01:54pm
Odyssey essay, comments please Well, for a high school or undergraduate essay... really for any essay... quotes can be added in at the end...	5	sczyra Jan 5, 09, 09:30pm	EF_Kevin Jan 6, 09, 03:21pm
Peony in love is my favorite book. Take a read of this essay please Jerry, that is some great advice. Actually, the thesis sentence often goes at the end of the first paragraph....	4	jenf3r Jan 5, 09, 07:21pm	EF_Kevin Jan 6, 09, 03:01pm
response paragraph for the essay "why we crave horror movies" Hi Thanks a lot for your corrections. This is my essay i really want to know whether i have...	3	craver Jan 2, 09, 02:05am	craver Jan 6, 09, 11:37am
Essay comments - "A place you go to relax" Thank you two for the feedback! I will change the end of the first paragraph to (my thesis statement):...	3	JerrySpock Jan 5, 09, 02:44pm	JerrySpock Jan 5, 09, 07:42pm
The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information Thank you all so much	4	franklamparden Jan 4, 09, 04:26am	franklamparden Jan 5, 09, 07:50am
The reasons for transfering - Transfer Admissions Essay It´s a very good essay, you´re being open and honest about yout thoughts. However, I think you should be a...	4	Bostonbound Sep 30, 08, 03:46pm	karena89 Jan 4, 09, 02:18pm
Aunt Junko, essay feedback thanks, it is a great help	2	seatoy Dec 30, 08, 06:52am	seatoy Jan 4, 09, 07:38am
for IELST...." sports or physical course is importmant "essay Is that true? Wow, schools should not drop phys. ed... it is so important! I is even important for...	4	pamfan0810 Jan 2, 09, 02:49am	EF_Kevin Jan 3, 09, 02:27pm
An essay about privacy and communication Another example is that when people use Internet cafés to check their email, some may forget to sign out which...	3	ray2008 Jan 1, 09, 03:01pm	EF_Kevin Jan 2, 09, 02:59pm
PERSONAL ESSAY, does it fit? (Pose an original question and answer it.) Do you mean the prompt much be your original thought? But I seemed to see it in one of the...	3	samosa Dec 28, 08, 11:33am	zxyxilin Jan 1, 09, 12:33am
Reflective Response on "To Build a Fire" by Jack London Nice job! Just use commas to introduce quotes: I think that the author does an excellent job building suspense...	1	rockd211 Dec 29, 08, 05:06pm	EF_Kevin Dec 30, 08, 11:30am
TOEFL: If you could invent sth new, what product would you develop? however i will resist the temptation because mine MY device in the long term will dissolve this issue WILL RESOLVE...	2	Nobel Dec 15, 08, 03:31pm	akashnegi Dec 30, 08, 10:55am
Paper feedback on Nationalized Healthcare Not bad. A few questions you might want to consider: "the lack of health care is a growing problem."...	1	cgryniewicz Dec 29, 08, 07:37pm	EF_Sean Dec 30, 08, 03:32am
writing to improve my essay - New Year resolution Hi: Kevin Thank you very much for your fast response and helpful comments. wu	3	vickyw Dec 28, 08, 10:53am	vickyw Dec 29, 08, 11:15am
"Prevention is better than cure" IELTS essay - much band score I can get? Greetings All, First of all take my thanks for a quick response. It will definitely help me a lot for...	3	kazi Dec 27, 08, 07:27am	kazi Dec 28, 08, 09:09pm
Why Lehigh, need corrections. I was always puzzled by his rapturous expression but he told me that the changes in China have been so...	1	owen92217 Dec 28, 08, 04:54am	EF_Kevin Dec 28, 08, 06:52pm
Essay: "What is art for me?" Can we give a current definition of something as abstract and boundless as that? The people who are not...	4	Power_Hammer Dec 27, 08, 10:33am	EF_Kevin Dec 27, 08, 10:31pm
Business Law Essay feedback (Stevens, Wiley & Co) Yes, these are supposed to be grounded in your course readings. Good luck! It's hard, but it can be fun,...	3	Tom Dec 26, 08, 01:19pm	EF_Kevin Dec 27, 08, 12:58pm
Account of Activities In early 2008, I participated in Beijing Olympic Games Volunteering Service. I was delighted when I learned that I had...	1	tonydengcnu Dec 25, 08, 06:29am	EF_Kevin Dec 26, 08, 11:35am
Academic Interest (I like math, physics and economics) During my studies, I try to link what I learned from books to the problems in real life. How...	2	tonydengcnu Dec 25, 08, 06:12am	EF_Kevin Dec 26, 08, 11:31am
My favorite word "Excellence" - essay help thanks, seatoy. It seems that you are also from China. Is that so?	4	tonydengcnu Dec 20, 08, 07:13am	tonydengcnu Dec 25, 08, 06:11am
Essay comparing two Short Stories-Topic: Naive Narrator thank you very much.	2	Mimiroselilly25 Dec 22, 08, 11:56pm	Mimiroselilly25 Dec 23, 08, 08:34pm
"the land of the east and west" my personal essays feedback needed YES! You are right to cut it down. When you write something, just like when you do anything else,...	7	Angela629 Dec 4, 08, 10:44am	EF_Kevin Dec 23, 08, 10:41am
"the pearl" by john steinbeck and i need help starting a thesis statement Great corrections from joshua here... I only found one more: After being chased by the trackers, he has...	2	flamingspike Dec 20, 08, 09:12pm	EF_Kevin Dec 21, 08, 01:10pm
"George Richman" - need revision help on writing a narrative During one summer day, Rich City was blooming with beauty. The trees are fully grown, everything is green, the...	2	yahman Dec 19, 08, 05:14pm	EF_Kevin Dec 20, 08, 10:38am
Essay on the Greate Gatsby novel ...and he also provides a contradictory view: "The whole town is desolate. You can take out the word "moreover"...	6	yahman May 1, 08, 08:45pm	EF_Kevin Dec 20, 08, 10:26am
"Experience of Cultural Difference" essay (pls. help revise, thanks) It does help, thanks!	2	tonydengcnu Dec 17, 08, 07:31am	tonydengcnu Dec 20, 08, 07:10am
Duality of good and evil essay You might find it helpful to read other works that present philosophies of good and evil The Virtue of Selfishness,...	5	kyudaime Dec 16, 08, 10:56pm	EF_Sean Dec 20, 08, 03:07am
notre dame essay!- please help me look through n give any suggestions thank you soo much!! :)!! any other improvements??	2	lilveni Dec 16, 08, 09:45pm	lilveni Dec 18, 08, 07:01am
Naturalism v Modernism - comparison essay I like your idea of comparing characteristics. I think I will go in that direction. Thanks	2	michaelfrye1970 Dec 16, 08, 09:09pm	michaelfrye1970 Dec 17, 08, 08:08pm
distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom lear Well, in your work there were a lot of mistakes. It's the way you think that is excellent!	3	Asselya Dec 16, 08, 07:40am	EF_Kevin Dec 17, 08, 04:10pm
"The Healthy Americans Act" - essay Thank you, it really helped!	2	Andrew Dec 16, 08, 01:51pm	Andrew Dec 17, 08, 10:42am
Need revision with Humanity Paper on "is humanity good/evil" You might want to consider taking issue with the question here. Good and evil are moral concepts that presuppose free...	1	chiknugget Dec 16, 08, 09:37pm	EF_Sean Dec 17, 08, 06:48am
what are some of the experiences that have shapped your outlook and the way thank you very much...i thought that this work is some kind of mess...because it is unusual topic and i wrote...	2	Asselya Dec 16, 08, 08:54am	Asselya Dec 17, 08, 06:26am
it is better to marry someone who is similar to you - essay thank you very much...)))	2	Asselya Dec 16, 08, 06:42am	Asselya Dec 17, 08, 06:18am
"Women like us." - Thousand Splendid Suns essays.. thank you. ill try my best	2	lady_b Dec 15, 08, 07:31pm	lady_b Dec 16, 08, 07:40pm
Multilateral Aid essay - please check my grammar mistakes No, I didn't think you were being rude! Words are a difficult means of communication.. :) Kevin...	4	rice Dec 16, 08, 02:28am	EF_Kevin Dec 16, 08, 04:01pm
"A Heart's Ruin" - Romeo and Juliet Essay Here are some ideas: Most characters play major roles in the tragedy, but Romeo presents the greatest evidence that...	2	dorukanji Dec 15, 08, 06:43pm	EF_Kevin Dec 16, 08, 11:17am
"Scientific Creativolution: Are Evolution and Creation Sciences?" Would anyone else like to aid in my endeavor? I'd be much obliged to get multiple perspectives.	9	Vaune Dec 14, 08, 11:08pm	Vaune Dec 16, 08, 03:45am
Essay: Preserve the old buildings or them with modern buildings? In my point of view, the importance of maintaining the historic buildings of a city could outweigh the value of...	1	camellia2008 Dec 15, 08, 10:08am	EF_Kevin Dec 15, 08, 05:51pm
person's childhood are the the most important years of a person's lives. Kevin, thanks a lot:)	2	camellia2008 Dec 14, 08, 09:58am	camellia2008 Dec 15, 08, 07:41am
"My hobby" essay (reading) Yes, how do you convey a feeling? I recommend making some time to read stephen king's On Writing....	3	jerry Dec 11, 08, 09:08am	EF_Kevin Dec 14, 08, 06:58pm
Charlotte Brontë: Jane Eyre Essay thank you! i'll work on it	2	tarynarmstrong Dec 12, 08, 11:15pm	tarynarmstrong Dec 14, 08, 11:53am
toefl: Why are groups or organizations important to people? Hi Sean,Angela and Kevin, Thank you for help. I will try to improve my essay.	4	camellia2008 Dec 12, 08, 12:13pm	camellia2008 Dec 14, 08, 05:44am
"My Dad in Me" essay need help with editing and any other things you notice thank you to the people you helped this helped a lot! :D	3	stef777 Dec 11, 08, 07:58pm	stef777 Dec 13, 08, 09:44am
Choose one of the following transportation vehicles - essay, change lives thanks...))	5	Asselya Nov 18, 08, 10:48am	Asselya Dec 13, 08, 06:20am
Essay on mandatory School Uniforms. Need revision help. The most noticeable problem with this essay is that you cut back and forth between both sides of the argument...	1	mollyvdb88 Dec 11, 08, 10:21pm	EF_Sean Dec 12, 08, 02:26am
Toefl: What is a very important skill a person should learn Sean, Thanks a lot. It's not easy for me to write toefl essay. I would try to...	5	camellia2008 Dec 10, 08, 11:32am	camellia2008 Dec 11, 08, 08:57pm
Essay help: Reference letter (teaching experience) During every class, she follows what I say and responds with enthusiasm. Whenever she comes across difficulties, she...	1	seatoy Dec 11, 08, 09:01am	EF_Kevin Dec 11, 08, 04:49pm
"I love my friends" essay, help edit Yes, your writing is technically sound, so that is great. You have good spelling and grammar....	2	stef777 Dec 10, 08, 09:59pm	EF_Kevin Dec 11, 08, 10:40am
essay about world crisis The economic crisis, which was only rumors few months ago, is making hard to get credit and work for all....	2	Gustavo Dec 10, 08, 11:24am	EF_Kevin Dec 11, 08, 09:49am
Essay help: reference letter thanks, it is a great help. seatoy	2	seatoy Dec 9, 08, 07:46am	seatoy Dec 11, 08, 09:00am
"the different generations" essay feedback thanks soooooooo much!!!	2	sarahmk Dec 6, 08, 05:02am	sarahmk Dec 11, 08, 06:14am
"Sunshine essay" - please help me with comments Hi! " Well, just nothing mum. Alright ! I'm coming, " I replied promptly. I think you must add...	4	getitlow Dec 9, 08, 11:28am	eng1 Dec 11, 08, 05:44am
Chivalry Essay, Advantages and Disadvantages Too much retelling of the story, not enough analysis. Also, what analysis there is tends to miss the mark. For...	1	vkwang Dec 10, 08, 08:08pm	EF_Sean Dec 10, 08, 11:16pm
"The Candy store" essay - need help on editing and a maybe a conclusion thank you so much, this helped	2	stef777 Dec 9, 08, 07:58pm	stef777 Dec 10, 08, 09:52pm
many people learned a foreign languga in their own country... Hi Asselya, I am preparing for toefl ibt,too. here are two websites,and you can find some information...	7	Asselya Dec 3, 08, 06:58pm	camellia2008 Dec 10, 08, 12:20pm
Plato, Aristotle, Dante (poetry v. philosophy essay) Thanks! that helped :)	4	summersnow Dec 9, 08, 03:49pm	summersnow Dec 9, 08, 08:19pm
European Union essay advice and corrections Topic 2: should turkey become a full member of the EU within the next 5years? please present relevant facts and...	2	sinaraneto Dec 5, 08, 08:08pm	sinaraneto Dec 9, 08, 04:49pm

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