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Increase physical education requirement in high school. Please help. Thx
Good morning. That would work just fine. One thing.... "After careful thought, I believe..."... »»
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2writebetter
Jul 24, 08, 07:34pm
EF_Team5
Jul 31, 08, 11:20am
Formal recommendation letter re: the vacation job
Any time. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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learningtowrite
Jul 25, 08, 07:57pm
EF_Team5
Jul 31, 08, 11:19am
Informal letter to Sarah
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learningtowrite
Jul 25, 08, 08:40pm
EF_Team5
Jul 31, 08, 11:18am
The impact of technology in modern life. Please critique my essay. Thx
You are welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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2writebetter
Jul 29, 08, 02:45am
EF_Team5
Jul 31, 08, 11:17am
My childhood experience and its effects. Please critique my essay. Thanks
Sure thing. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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2writebetter
Jul 30, 08, 05:08pm
EF_Team5
Jul 31, 08, 11:16am
Changing College Experience -- Please critique my essay. Thanks.
Good evening. Here are my suggestions: "If I could turn back the clock to make... »»
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2writebetter
Jul 30, 08, 12:22pm
EF_Team5
Jul 30, 08, 10:15pm
Essay about bottoming out
Good morning. OK, here's what I see: "...who will hit "rock bottom,"..." Punctuation generally is... »»
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sarahmk
Jul 3, 08, 02:24am
EF_Team5
Jul 30, 08, 09:18am
Experience difficulty in school essay. Please help. Thanks.
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "Nearly every student experiences difficulty while he or she... »»
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2writebetter
Jul 28, 08, 12:31am
EF_Team5
Jul 28, 08, 08:58am
Speech- should the use of uniform be discarded?
You're welcome! Test anxiety is tough to beat, but if you are well prepared before hand,... »»
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learningtowrite
Jul 25, 08, 09:30pm
EF_Team5
Jul 27, 08, 08:52am
I need your feedback on my "Interview Essay" Please!
You're welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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newworld
Jul 22, 08, 04:06pm
EF_Team5
Jul 24, 08, 03:28pm
HAVE YOUR EATING HABITS CHANGED SINCE YOU'VE BEEN IN COLLEGE?
Well kudos to you anyway! You still did a great job! The more you practice and... »»
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zoh
Jul 15, 08, 10:33pm
EF_Team5
Jul 24, 08, 08:06am
Traditional Costumes - Reflective essay
I think it could go either way. You could write a personal recount in present tense, and... »»
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learningtowrite
Jul 17, 08, 04:26am
EF_Team5
Jul 24, 08, 08:04am
Why I want to be a nurse - please review my essay and help me
You are very welcome! Good luck! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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hjy8703
Jul 21, 08, 07:05am
EF_Team5
Jul 24, 08, 08:02am
any help on e.m forster flat and round character essay please?!
You are very welcome! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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chachar
Jul 21, 08, 04:51pm
EF_Team5
Jul 24, 08, 07:52am
Engineers and engineering - argumentative essay, I need your feedback.
Good evening. Here are my suggestions: "Engineering is in the hands of the engineer. I... »»
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hupdy
Jul 23, 08, 07:05pm
EF_Team5
Jul 23, 08, 09:42pm
Skeletal muscle physiology
Good morning. They're keeping you busy, aren't they? :) Here are my suggestions: "An... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 22, 08, 10:53am
EF_Team5
Jul 23, 08, 08:50am
Comparison of the pelvis in females and males
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "Since sexual dimorphism is rather obvious when examining an... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 22, 08, 10:51am
EF_Team5
Jul 23, 08, 08:30am
Terrorists' victims
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "First and foremost, it is judicious to remind the... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 22, 08, 10:47am
EF_Team5
Jul 23, 08, 08:17am
A Beautiful Sunday Morning -- Please critique my descriptive writing. Thx
You are very welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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2writebetter
Jul 21, 08, 12:29am
EF_Team5
Jul 21, 08, 03:27pm
Critique on primary source analysis, British Working Class
Kudos to you for looking to improve your writing! Try looking into some grammar/English writing textbooks. Prentice... »»
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shatterX
Jul 16, 08, 07:23pm
EF_Team5
Jul 17, 08, 10:29pm
Is stereotyping a problem in today's society?
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "Stereotyping is a huge problem in today's society. It... »»
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zoh
Jul 16, 08, 04:00pm
EF_Team5
Jul 16, 08, 05:13pm
Nothing new under the sun?: Darwinian surprises of skin colours
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "From the point of view of anatomy and physiology,... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 15, 08, 02:06pm
EF_Team5
Jul 16, 08, 08:21am
Spread of the jihadist movement in the ligh ethology and Darwinian security
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "In the wake of the dramatic attacks on the... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 15, 08, 10:04am
EF_Team5
Jul 16, 08, 08:06am
Corn Ethanol: Renewable Energy gone bad -- Please help. Thanks.
Yes, you could do it that way. You could also do: According to Wikipedia, if the... »»
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2writebetter
Jul 15, 08, 02:20am
EF_Team5
Jul 15, 08, 10:20am
Interpretation of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost
Good evening. Right off, my advice to you is do not compare your work to texts... »»
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alexdehaan
Jul 13, 08, 08:53pm
EF_Team5
Jul 13, 08, 10:50pm
should Korean teachers of English be required to pass on speaking test?
Good evening! Here are my suggestions: "Last winter, the Ministry of Education announced that... »»
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je2ks2
Jul 13, 08, 06:31pm
EF_Team5
Jul 13, 08, 10:34pm
Gendered Communications Essay
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emilysk8
Jul 12, 08, 12:10pm
EF_Team5
Jul 13, 08, 10:23pm
My grandfather is my hero -- Your feedback is greatly appreciated. Thx
Thank you, and you are very welcome. I wish the same to you! Regards, Gloria Moderator,... »»
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2writebetter
Jul 10, 08, 12:37am
EF_Team5
Jul 12, 08, 12:03pm
vision 2020:A Mirage
Good afternoon. What are the requirements for this assignment? The more information I have about what... »»
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Nicodemus
Jul 11, 08, 09:00am
EF_Team5
Jul 11, 08, 02:51pm
Are rich children always happier than those who come from poorer families?
You are very welcome. You will know if you can answer these questions by the "feel" of... »»
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learningtowrite
Jul 9, 08, 10:08am
EF_Team5
Jul 11, 08, 07:53am
An electric vehicle should be your next car -- Please give me feedback. Thx
Hello! You are very welcome! I enjoy watching as your writing improves, and improving it is!... »»
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2writebetter
Jul 8, 08, 11:54pm
EF_Team5
Jul 10, 08, 01:57pm
Sickled red blood cells and homeostasis - essay
Good evening :) Here are my suggestions: "Sickle cell disease is an epitome of the... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 8, 08, 11:58am
EF_Team5
Jul 8, 08, 11:11pm
Argumentative Letter on same sex marriage
You're welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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gabedreyer
May 16, 08, 02:36pm
EF_Team5
Jul 8, 08, 09:53am
Quality or characteristic that helps be a good parent - my 1st Formal Essay
You are welcome! Good luck! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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nclester
May 25, 08, 05:42pm
EF_Team5
Jul 8, 08, 09:52am
A Farewell Note to the Class
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Rajiv
Apr 20, 08, 09:50pm
EF_Team5
Jul 8, 08, 09:51am
European Championship - football essay
Good morning. It's like that too in America, but we have to be careful when we... »»
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oranje
Jul 4, 08, 03:30pm
EF_Team5
Jul 8, 08, 09:48am
Television essay - "It is all about TV"
Good morning! You are very welcome. OK, if that sounds good to you and it is... »»
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oranje
Jul 5, 08, 04:07pm
EF_Team5
Jul 8, 08, 09:31am
Youth and Technology - essay
You are very welcome. Tense is something that all writers, no matter what their level, have... »»
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Geist
Jul 6, 08, 10:53pm
EF_Team5
Jul 7, 08, 09:58pm
Chemical compounds and human life processes - short lecture
Good evening :) Here are my suggestions: "Since the chemical level is the smallest unit... »»
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FredParisFrance
Jul 7, 08, 12:16pm
EF_Team5
Jul 7, 08, 09:53pm
Please read my paraphased paragraph!
Good evening. Here are my suggestions: "A study regarding online plagiarism implied that the... »»
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Geist
Jul 5, 08, 03:28pm
EF_Team5
Jul 6, 08, 01:21am
Establish a duty of care- Tort Law
If you are going to post your essay with the corrections made, I can edit it again... »»
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pwincesspink
Jul 4, 08, 01:13pm
EF_Team5
Jul 5, 08, 03:06pm
The three traits of a good essay(Is this essay any good?)
Good morning :) This is a good essay; you give clear, concise information. Just a few... »»
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Noethe
Jul 4, 08, 02:58am
EF_Team5
Jul 4, 08, 10:54am
Problems are Opportunities in Disguise
Good afternoon :) Here are my suggestions: "Bob Maynard has said that "Problems are opportunities... »»
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cutieiy
Jul 1, 08, 12:25pm
EF_Team5
Jul 1, 08, 05:53pm
Attending service at Pilgrims' Rest Baptist Church - critique my essay
Any time! Post whenever you need, and I'll do my best to help! Regards, Gloria Moderator,... »»
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crystalcrj310
Jun 23, 08, 11:27pm
EF_Team5
Jul 1, 08, 11:38am
the way of nominating homeroom teacher
You are welcome; anytime! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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je2ks2
Jun 17, 08, 09:03am
EF_Team5
Jun 27, 08, 08:05am
The beauty of an individual - essay
Good morning :) OK, let's see what we've got: "Women today are judged on their... »»
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sarahmk
Jun 22, 08, 07:14pm
EF_Team5
Jun 26, 08, 08:45am
Sustainable Agriculture
OK, let's see what we've got here: "Sustainable agriculture means "...agriculture that is socially just, humane,... »»
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sarahmk
Jun 22, 08, 12:56pm
EF_Team5
Jun 25, 08, 09:32am
Essay on Divorce Rates in Canada
Good morning :) Here are my suggestions: "The State of Divorce in Canada: Why individuals... »»
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sarahmk
Jun 22, 08, 12:58pm
EF_Team5
Jun 25, 08, 09:03am
native English teachers vs non-native teachers
Good morning :) Here are my suggestions: "For many decades, it has been believed that... »»
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je2ks2
Jun 24, 08, 09:51am
EF_Team5
Jun 25, 08, 08:10am
Credit Card Invention - essay check
Good evening. This essay is coming along quite nicely. Here are my suggestions: "The best... »»
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pinks1026
Jun 21, 08, 11:48pm
EF_Team5
Jun 22, 08, 10:27pm
curriculum vitae - my first essay
Excellent; it is much more clear for your readers. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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oranje
Jun 21, 08, 11:05am
EF_Team5
Jun 22, 08, 04:57pm
45 minute essay
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "The public school system is not teaching our... »»
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bonechills
Jun 20, 08, 05:02pm
EF_Team5
Jun 21, 08, 09:28am
Teenagers should not be allowed to date. Please review.
You're welcome. Feel free to post as you need to. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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james78
Jun 18, 08, 07:10pm
EF_Team5
Jun 19, 08, 10:48pm
Willie Russel - making the cliff scene dramatic
You're welcome. Go ahead and post it once you've cleaned this one up, and we'll go on... »»
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pwincesspink
Jun 19, 08, 05:24am
EF_Team5
Jun 19, 08, 10:38am
"Teenagers nowadays have adopted a consumerist lifestyle."
You are welcome! I do think your essay is relevant to the topic; you answer the... »»
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learningtowrite
Jun 18, 08, 09:24am
EF_Team5
Jun 19, 08, 08:54am
Essay on "giving up on hope."
Good morning. Your essay is coming along nicely. Here are my suggestions: "The Lawrence Heights... »»
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sarahmk
Jun 16, 08, 09:39pm
EF_Team5
Jun 18, 08, 07:27am
Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted?
You are very welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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kitty20111983
Jun 13, 08, 02:17am
EF_Team5
Jun 17, 08, 06:51am
"Promised end" the soul yearns for to be thwarted by the demand of history
Good morning :) Here are my suggestions: "The thesis of the essay is: "Whatever 'promised... »»
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sarahmk
Jun 13, 08, 02:57pm
EF_Team5
Jun 16, 08, 08:55am
Please help me with history of the UK
Good morning :) Here are my suggestions: "The UK has experienced many different changes... »»
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lowryder49
Jun 15, 08, 08:17pm
EF_Team5
Jun 16, 08, 08:28am
Please check my essay about myself?
Anytime! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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Canterbury
Jun 14, 08, 08:21am
EF_Team5
Jun 15, 08, 11:26am
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