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The Great Gatsby - help with my grammar and essay organization
It is not appropriate to post your personal information on this forum. If you wish to contact... »»
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sarahmk
Jan 30, 08, 03:50am
CaitiCat
Sep 21, 08, 07:50pm
Essay on addiction - what does it mean?
Good afternoon. How about something like "Lesser Known Addictions" or "Addicted to Technology"? You're welcome.... »»
3
rivoltaleandro
Sep 20, 08, 12:13pm
EF_Team5
Sep 21, 08, 01:36pm
Beautiful death of Hektor
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "Are the aesthetics of one's death defined by one's... »»
1
bizkitgirlzc
Sep 19, 08, 08:22pm
EF_Team5
Sep 20, 08, 10:39am
"The Fort" - Need EDITING Feedback on Personal Experience
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3
CavortingChickn
Sep 18, 08, 10:29pm
EF_Team5
Sep 20, 08, 10:16am
The Freedom Writers Diary - Why it is Important to Read such Novels
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "Yes, I feel it is important for readers to... »»
1
aioghps
Sep 18, 08, 05:03pm
EF_Team5
Sep 19, 08, 07:49am
Essay: "Video surveilance is essential"
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3
rsgino7
Sep 17, 08, 06:20pm
EF_Team5
Sep 18, 08, 04:21pm
Early childhood eassy on creativity
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3
mac3
Sep 16, 08, 07:31pm
EF_Team5
Sep 18, 08, 07:49am
Literary Response on "The man who loved levittown" by wheatherall
Good morning. It looks like you are on the right track. Your questions are leading to... »»
1
jeseniainsc
Sep 17, 08, 10:30pm
EF_Team5
Sep 18, 08, 07:46am
Essay about Turning Point in Life
Thank you for editing my essay Gloria. I really appreciate it, especially how fast you replied!... »»
2
Admantina
Sep 17, 08, 08:48pm
Admantina
Sep 17, 08, 09:40pm
Comparative Analysis Essay of Heroes
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3
Reprieve
Sep 16, 08, 07:08pm
EF_Team5
Sep 17, 08, 08:47pm
Letter about "My most unhappy experience"
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3
sweetbitterrose
Sep 16, 08, 10:01am
EF_Team5
Sep 17, 08, 05:34pm
Common Application Essay: Balance
OK, I see. That helps; thanks! "I can feel the eyes piercing me from all angles.... »»
3
mas61691
Sep 16, 08, 02:03pm
EF_Team5
Sep 17, 08, 05:01pm
Drunk - sad story
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3
learningtowrite
Sep 15, 08, 03:31am
EF_Team5
Sep 16, 08, 02:47pm
Yet another FSU undergraduate admisssions essay
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3
BrynnD
Sep 8, 08, 07:15pm
EF_Team5
Sep 16, 08, 02:31pm
More education than required at job site equals dissatisfaction? - essay
Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "Most employers require a certain education level from their... »»
1
nezzaru
Sep 15, 08, 07:27am
EF_Team5
Sep 15, 08, 05:50pm
I am essay - being a baseball player and being a guitar player
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3
go cardinals
Sep 14, 08, 01:43am
EF_Team5
Sep 15, 08, 05:38pm
mental health wellbeing
Good evening. What kind of assistance are you seeking? Usually essays posted to this forum are... »»
1
bushofoa
Sep 12, 08, 10:55am
EF_Team5
Sep 12, 08, 08:25pm
UF Essay - exited about the maturing experience
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3
mollyrama09
Sep 11, 08, 04:21pm
EF_Team5
Sep 11, 08, 08:46pm
Plato "The Republic" essay topic " what does Plato mena by "do better then"
You are very welcome. In regards to your question, please refer to our TOS, found at... »»
3
Eka
Sep 10, 08, 10:40am
EF_Team5
Sep 11, 08, 08:15pm
SAT essay- adversity helps us discover who we are
Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "I take every obstacle in my life as a... »»
1
maverick288
Sep 10, 08, 07:38am
EF_Team5
Sep 10, 08, 05:14pm
Freshman Composition 1 essay. Please help this essay is worth a lot.
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "It all began with the sound of a man... »»
1
Myles18
Sep 9, 08, 09:29pm
EF_Team5
Sep 10, 08, 04:57pm
12 Angry Men Essay
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nclester
Sep 9, 08, 04:40pm
EF_Team5
Sep 10, 08, 04:40pm
Lewis Carroll - biography and style/literary devices.
Good afternoon. What are the requirements for the assignment? Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
1
RAJIV26
Sep 9, 08, 09:38pm
EF_Team5
Sep 10, 08, 04:39pm
Parents should choose the best univ. possible for their kids. Agree or dis.
Good morning. Here are my thoughts: "Nowadays, many parents feel that their children should enter... »»
1
nezzaru
Sep 9, 08, 08:15am
EF_Team5
Sep 9, 08, 12:11pm
Thesis (essay) The Storm and The story of an hour
Good morning. A few suggestions: "She did not stop to ask if it were not... »»
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jeseniainsc
Sep 3, 08, 12:00pm
EF_Team5
Sep 9, 08, 12:02pm
Locklist ----Letter of appeal for continuance workstudy
Good morning. Here are my thoughts: "Dear xxxxxx, When I first started El Camino... »»
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babydoll
Sep 8, 08, 10:34pm
EF_Team5
Sep 9, 08, 11:58am
Tell us what you do for the pleasure of it - short essay b
Good evening. Here are my thoughts: "I find pleasure in stories. I love reading novels,... »»
1
michel92
Sep 8, 08, 03:08pm
EF_Team5
Sep 8, 08, 06:48pm
Places of my interest - essay question
Good evening. "Among the various places the place of my interest is the children's park that... »»
1
sangita
Sep 7, 08, 08:05pm
EF_Team5
Sep 7, 08, 09:02pm
Essay: Can Success be disastrous?
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "In life, everyone sets his or her own personal... »»
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SATHelp
Sep 4, 08, 07:28am
EF_Team5
Sep 4, 08, 05:14pm
A good teacher should assign homework. Are you agree or disagree?
Good evening. Here are my suggestions: "Examinations have become an effective method to test... »»
1
hattrick3011
Sep 2, 08, 09:50pm
EF_Team5
Sep 3, 08, 07:00pm
Writing a descriptive story about Christmas - creative writing
You are very welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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shorty4258
Aug 29, 08, 05:22pm
EF_Team5
Sep 3, 08, 06:44pm
the most important reasons for Europeans to migrate to New Zealand, XVIII c
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "New Zealand, a country in the Pacific, increased its... »»
1
sylock232
Sep 1, 08, 08:34am
EF_Team5
Sep 1, 08, 11:44am
annual car and truck safety survey - An argument essay
Thanks for your helping :) »»
2
franklamparden
Sep 1, 08, 03:34am
franklamparden
Sep 1, 08, 11:42am
I used to fear the Night - essay
Good morning. Here are my thoughts: "When I was younger, I used to fear the... »»
1
learningtowrite
Sep 1, 08, 05:01am
EF_Team5
Sep 1, 08, 11:37am
Social Identity assignment
Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "In order to explore our identities regarding class, race,... »»
1
elibats
Aug 29, 08, 12:30am
EF_Team5
Aug 29, 08, 04:53pm
Personal Response Essay On Lee Fong Gwo Case
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "According to National Public Radio, for a singer of... »»
1
ken
Aug 27, 08, 06:49pm
EF_Team5
Aug 28, 08, 05:23pm
Essay: Who should pay tuition fees? STUDENTS or the GOVERNMENT?
Good afternoon :) Educational system. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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stressful
Aug 22, 08, 09:22am
EF_Team5
Aug 26, 08, 05:14pm
Initial Assessment Essay, "The Story of an Hour"
Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "Are the differences from the late 1800's and the... »»
4
jrobertson49
Aug 25, 08, 02:43pm
EF_Team5
Aug 26, 08, 05:10pm
global warming intro
Great job! One small change though: "After years of research scientists have finally come to the... »»
1
nangy
Aug 25, 08, 01:42am
EF_Team5
Aug 25, 08, 03:51pm
Unique qualities and characteristics - UCF essay help
Good afternoon. Let's see: "I woke up to the sound of music blaring near my... »»
3
sportzgrrrl
Aug 24, 08, 11:47am
EF_Team5
Aug 25, 08, 03:48pm
essay on face-to-face communication VS phone,mail,letter...
Both of those are fine; they are still used frequently today. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
3
urgent
Aug 19, 08, 11:21am
EF_Team5
Aug 24, 08, 01:09pm
Religion Argumentative Essay
You're welcome. It's easy to sometimes let those references slip by, isn't it? I hope to hear... »»
3
KIDS
Aug 20, 08, 06:56pm
EF_Team5
Aug 21, 08, 10:21pm
Outer space explore vs. Basic needs essay
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "Although outer space exploration provides us unprecedented knowledge that... »»
1
ngngmaiphuong
Aug 19, 08, 09:32am
EF_Team5
Aug 19, 08, 05:06pm
"Jennifer Lim" - College Application Essay (feedback please!)
You are very welcome. Each time you write, you will get better. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com... »»
3
op2607
Aug 16, 08, 02:40am
EF_Team5
Aug 16, 08, 09:11pm
Essay on Education
Sure :) Well, what about personal improvement? As one rises through the levels of education is... »»
5
learningtowrite
Aug 15, 08, 06:58am
EF_Team5
Aug 16, 08, 01:18pm
essay on Juliets speech in Romeo and Juliet Modernized
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "The play "Romeo and Juliet" written by William Shakespeare... »»
1
sylock232
Aug 16, 08, 09:52am
EF_Team5
Aug 16, 08, 01:14pm
Essay about four major generations.
I'm not extensively familiar with APA, which is why I am suggesting you double check. I would... »»
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sarahmk
Jul 30, 08, 02:01am
EF_Team5
Aug 16, 08, 08:27am
Youth Culture Development - negative, influencial factor
OK. Do an internet search for "APA reference style examples" and find a page that will show... »»
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sarahmk
Aug 7, 08, 01:09am
EF_Team5
Aug 14, 08, 09:13am
Topic 4: prohibite smoking in public places
Let's see: "Even thought it is true that there is a definite link between smoking and... »»
5
Sophie
Jun 5, 08, 01:24pm
EF_Team5
Aug 12, 08, 08:34am
ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH, SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT? - Essay Revision
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "The thing at hand is about the advantages and... »»
1
ppc
Aug 8, 08, 01:42am
EF_Team5
Aug 12, 08, 08:28am
"The Waste Land" as a Manifestation of Dream Content
Sure thing! You know, it really depends on your citation style. MLA requires the complete citation... »»
3
elibats
Aug 11, 08, 07:17am
EF_Team5
Aug 12, 08, 08:12am
Taking a position in a timed essay
Sounds great; I look forward to it. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
3
summer
Aug 10, 08, 01:12am
EF_Team5
Aug 12, 08, 07:58am
Paragraph about School and Writing
You're very welcome. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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tomotomo
Aug 9, 08, 07:58pm
EF_Team5
Aug 11, 08, 04:27pm
Behemoth (a rollercoaster): Recount of an event
Thanks; that helps. Here are my suggestions: "On a sunny day, time passed by... »»
3
FissionMailed
Aug 9, 08, 12:05pm
EF_Team5
Aug 9, 08, 10:55pm
nature vs nurture issue - essay?
Good evening. Here are my suggestions: " "Nature or nurture" issues have been at... »»
1
je2ks2
Aug 2, 08, 08:43am
EF_Team5
Aug 2, 08, 09:43pm
Essay about School Breaks
You are so very welcome! Keep up the good work! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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tomotomo
Jul 31, 08, 10:25pm
EF_Team5
Aug 1, 08, 09:09pm
My disappointment of art class essay -- Please give feedback. Thanks
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "Throughout my childhood I always wanted to take drawing... »»
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2writebetter
Aug 1, 08, 01:14am
EF_Team5
Aug 1, 08, 09:22am
U.S. is becoming a nation of spectators - Please critique my essay. Thanks
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "The U.S. is becoming a nation of spectators –... »»
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2writebetter
Aug 1, 08, 01:05am
EF_Team5
Aug 1, 08, 09:18am
Virginia Woolf's "A Mark on the Wall"
Good morning. Here are my suggestions: ""The Mark on the Wall" as an Analysis of... »»
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elibats
Jul 31, 08, 11:54pm
EF_Team5
Aug 1, 08, 08:35am
Can success be disastrous -sat essay...
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "The one thing that everyone wants in their life... »»
1
letsdothis
Jul 31, 08, 01:24pm
EF_Team5
Jul 31, 08, 02:47pm
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