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Good evening. Here are my thoughts: "Sexuality, more exposed than ever, is now a common... »»
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Good evening. You've got two good pieces here, so I'm going to give you some suggestions... »»
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You're very welcome. I don't think writing a new piece is necessary, just add a little bit... »»
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Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "Drugs are generally defined as a substance which alters... »»
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Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "Before I got into Eng107 I had been writing... »»
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Good afternoon :) OK, let's see: "My fingers dance over the tungsten-wound steel strings. Major... »»
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Good evening. Here are my thoughts: "...jobs and get promoted." "...employees in this... »»
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hey babydoll, well i was researching for the same paper that you have... »»
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Oct 21, 08, 11:43am
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Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the... »»
Oct 23, 08, 12:21am
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ThuyChi, You are a very good judge of character, as I have been a teacher and... »»
Oct 23, 08, 01:09pm
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I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the... »»
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Oct 22, 08, 05:14pm
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Good morning. I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed... »»
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Oct 21, 08, 09:50am
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Good afternoon. OK, let's see: "I have heard much about the beauty of Singapore, one... »»
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Sep 22, 08, 02:40pm
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Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "During my lifetime, I have made a prodigious number... »»
Sep 2, 08, 09:22am
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Good morning. Here are my suggestions: "The question signifies that there has been an apparent... »»
Oct 20, 08, 09:36pm
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Let me make sure I understand you. You are to write a paper about something a normal... »»
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Oct 20, 08, 05:07am
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Well, it is difficult for me to tell you whether or not your essay answers the prompt,... »»
Oct 19, 08, 08:00pm
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Oct 20, 08, 10:29am
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Oct 18, 08, 08:46pm
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Good afternoon. In regards to usage, I suggest one of the books from the "Prentice Hall... »»
Oct 15, 08, 10:13pm
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Oct 19, 08, 10:38am
Oct 20, 08, 12:51pm
Good evening. As you did not include the prompt and/or requirements for this essay, I can... »»
Oct 19, 08, 05:14pm
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No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is... »»
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You're very welcome. Thank you for the words of encouragement. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any... »»
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I'm very glad that we've been of help! Let me know if there's anything else I... »»
Oct 17, 08, 06:17pm
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Good evening. Here are my suggestions: "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe... »»
Oct 17, 08, 04:24pm
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Good morning. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting,... »»
Oct 17, 08, 10:43am
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Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "Zip, zap, zoom!" went my..." "...does my Play... »»
Oct 16, 08, 08:22am
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Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "Land for nature conservation or for industrialization are... »»
Oct 16, 08, 01:44am
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Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook"... »»
Oct 15, 08, 09:23am
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Oct 13, 08, 11:52pm
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Oct 15, 08, 10:23am
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Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com »»
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Oct 13, 08, 04:26pm
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Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "In nowadays many people and their kids celebrate holiday... »»
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You're very welcome. Good luck, and let me know how it goes! Regards, Gloria Moderator,... »»
Oct 13, 08, 03:43pm
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Good evening. Here are my thoughts: First, make sure you are including your punctuation inside... »»
Oct 14, 08, 01:08pm
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Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with... »»
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